is this too dark:

roses are blue,

violets are red,

why dont you kill me,

oh wait im already dead

Question

is this too dark:

roses are blue,

violets are red,

why dont you kill me,

oh wait im already dead

ThatWeirdo · Answer

i have no words..... this is the work of a true artist *crying and claping*

ThatWeirdo · Answer

and no its the perfect amount of dark

UhhhKhakis · Answer

Not too dark...... a little funny to me actually.

Joe348 · Answer

Not dark at all just humorous and how can u kill someone thats already dead unless ou want ther soul?

TaitlynCroft · Answer

@thatweirdo wrote:

i have no words..... this is the work of a true artist *crying and claping*

This is my 11 y.o little brother XD

makaylab · Answer

BRAVO MAN BRAVO

BrokenMoon · Answer

Im confused. How are you talking if your already dead, also i think you could make the last line rhyme a bit more.

TannerCroft · Answer

red and dead

TannerCroft · Answer

rhyms

TaitlynCroft · Answer

He mainly did this for fun we we're laughing about it a minute ago

bri05 · Answer

perfect amount of death and darkness in a poem *claps* amazing

makaylab · Answer

cleanses my emo soul

TannerCroft · Answer

thank you

TannerCroft · Answer

thank you very much

bri05 · Answer

did you write this urself?

TannerCroft · Answer

yes

TaitlynCroft · Answer

My 6th grade brother bragging no saying he's an ~arteest~
Way to boost his ego yall

TETSXPREME · Answer

it doesnt even rhyme dude

TannerCroft · Answer

roses are red

violets are blue

I'm in a rage

what should I do?

BrokenMoon · Answer

just.... its just not that good, no offence

TannerCroft · Answer

@tetsxpreme wrote:

it doesnt even rhyme dude

red and dead

TannerCroft · Answer

rhyme

TannerCroft · Answer

@tannercroft wrote:

roses are red violets are blue I'm in a rage what should I do?

what about this

honeylove · Answer

I think it is very straight to the point I like it

drpepper · Answer

I love it!!!!

afflatedAnimism · Answer

It's not dark at all. It's pretty bland.

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

just.... its just not that good, no offence

Agree.

594ikfo94 · Answer

its good

drpepper · Answer

This has a very deep meaning and it can make people visualize someone's perspective about life. I love it! I really do! People have their own opinions and this is mine, and btw saying "no offense" doesn't mean people are not going to take it offensively, people are different you never know what they are going through or how they see life. But opinions ARE appreciated it just depends on how you explain them.

BrokenMoon · Answer

I feel like its supposed to ryhme more tho try roses r red villets are blue ur mom is gay soon u will be too or sumthn like that idk

itzselena · Answer

it's something unexpexted i liked it

chloeandkailee4life · Answer

it was very unexpected it was great!

Rylee88 · Answer

That doesnt rhyme xD but nice ig