Question

i start it of with a solid beat
and then i start going
Yea
when u smile
i feel like im a mile
cuz i know i can never get that for myself

eerynight i look on my shelf and i think what am i gonna do with all theses

i was up here now im down here she shot like a deer laying on the ground i aint showin fear i aint sheddin tears cuz that s what she wants but the aint what she gonna get im not a piece of cake im complicated
im like a maze once u reach the end u think hooray but not with me once u reach the end u wish u could turn back but its to late for alll that time to get used to it it cuz i aint comin back
25 minutes ago
im inside of a trance something i cant in hance but then god sent me another chance
its bout time cuz i really need this her name is roxy and i am feelin this
its like a dream but in real life its bout time god took the knife outta my hand and put me with somene that makes me a better man
my life was to hard i havent gotten to far but ti think god put me in your arms to give me the chance i nedd to inhance to embrace myself for the life in front of
myself
Flop or drop? i wrote it myself

Answer 1

I'd say it's really good!! Work on your spelling and grammar though, and maybe format it better.

Answer 2

Drop

Answer 3

Great song overall tho

Answer 4

The whole point of the grammer and speeling is supposed to be speled like that cuz its a shortstop word thanks for the advice btw drop means publish and flop means dont publish

Answer 5

every night needs to be fixed though

Answer 6

Thats very nice I ike it

Answer 7

i do too is beautiful

Answer 8

Thanks for the support yall

Answer 9

Np

Answer 10

so should i drop the song?

Answer 11

I see some spelling and grammar mistakes. also when you do something like "cuz", do "'cause" instead with a comma at the beginning, its more better for grammar and spelling reasons. and when you do "showin", make sure you put a comma at the end, it should look like "showin'" instead.

Answer 12

Other then that its good, and if you want to drop the song then do so.

Answer 13

Well i would like yalls opinion on it and this is just a hard copy of my song not the final version
but i am glad yall are very intent with grammer and spelling

Answer 14

Thanks for yals help

Answer 15

It's pretty good

Answer 16

its... somethig

Answer 17

aye u can feature me