UGKRza tested me to make a song so i wrote this for em
this is definetly horrible bbut anywho here the lyrics.

Oh oh oh
I fall in a dark void of sadness
my parent say in depressing
they that i can't have him
i want that dog
i want to feel loved
I want you in my life
But all i think about is this knife
slice
slice
of bye bye i will see you later
i cant even the elevator
im fat and big
i cant even see my jig
the girl says they want a piece of me but
all I see you and me
oh I'm fat i see that
you small and small like a cat
oh UGK oh RZA
put them together and you got something pretay
Oh it can i can't have you my life is upside down
Oh i can't see you in fat and I'm going to the ground
so ill say
slice
slice
slice
bye bye bye
I'm going away I'm going to say bye-bye bye
slice slice slice
one after another
oh I'm falling into a dark void with brain
oh i am passing on i cant see you because im gone

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UGKRza tested me  to make a song so i wrote this for em
this is definetly horrible bbut anywho here the lyrics.

Oh oh oh
I fall in a dark void of sadness
my parent say in depressing 
they that i can't have him
i want that dog
i want to feel loved
I want you in my life 
But all i think about is this knife
slice
slice
of bye bye i will see you later
i cant even the  elevator
im fat and big
i cant even see my jig
the girl says they want a piece of me but 
all I see you and me
oh I'm fat i see that
you small and small like a cat
oh UGK oh RZA 
put them together and you got something pretay
Oh it can i can't have you my life is upside down
Oh i can't see you in fat and I'm going to the ground
so ill say 
slice 
slice 
slice
bye bye bye
I'm going away I'm going to say bye-bye bye
slice slice slice 
one after another
oh I'm falling into a dark void with brain 
oh i am passing on i cant see you because im gone

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

so many missing words lol

Sock · Answer

A few misspellings and missing words, might want to proofread a bit. I would need a beat to the song for me to completely tell you how I feel. Maybe consider singing it so we can hear the beat. Overall it's decent, heard worst heard better.

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

@sock wrote:

A few misspellings and missing words, might want to proofread a bit. I would need a beat to the song for me to completely tell you how I feel. Maybe consider singing it so we can hear the beat. Overall it's decent, heard worst heard better.

there is no way im singing this its bad

Sock · Answer

@theofficialdevan12 wrote:

@sock wrote:

A few misspellings and missing words, might want to proofread a bit. I would need a beat to the song for me to completely tell you how I feel. Maybe consider singing it so we can hear the beat. Overall it's decent, heard worst heard better.

there is no way im singing this its bad

It's not that bad, it's not like you are a professional or anything such as that.

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

@sock wrote:

@theofficialdevan12 wrote:

@sock wrote:

A few misspellings and missing words, might want to proofread a bit. I would need a beat to the song for me to completely tell you how I feel. Maybe consider singing it so we can hear the beat. Overall it's decent, heard worst heard better.

there is no way im singing this its bad

It's not that bad, it's not like you are a professional or anything such as that.

i will be soon

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

this is just a funny little stupid thing though

Sock · Answer

@theofficialdevan12 wrote:

@sock wrote:

@theofficialdevan12 wrote:

@sock wrote:

A few misspellings and missing words, might want to proofread a bit. I would need a beat to the song for me to completely tell you how I feel. Maybe consider singing it so we can hear the beat. Overall it's decent, heard worst heard better.

there is no way im singing this its bad

It's not that bad, it's not like you are a professional or anything such as that.

i will be soon

Good luck to you on that good zir

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

i did this within 4 minutes

urmomspet · Answer

eh its alright

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

so its is no wheregood nor will this even go bbut i will post a song i ahve been working on for a while later

TheOfficialDevan12 · Answer

jesus  my spelling