Question

help

Answer 1

Rewrite this passage to remove the error in logic that hurts the author's credibility.

Answer 2

The whole city is littered with trash, and we need to do something about it. It's so bad that garbage is floating in the ocean and being washed up on our shores. If we can control our consumption and limit how much trash we generate, then we'll be able to combat this menace. Plastic bags should be banned because it is the only way that we can possibly clean up our city streets. Either we ban plastic bags, or we continue to live in filth and squalor.

Answer 3

I sometimes use quillbot.com to help rewrite the passage and understand it better.

Answer 4

garbage is floating supposed to be "Its" instead of is

Answer 5

A good website to use for this type if stuff is gramerly. I would look for spelling errors and grammar correction. When you are done I would run it through gramerly to make sure everything looks correct.

Answer 6

Another good thing to do is ask a friend or teacher or class mate to proof read to double check that everything looks good.