Question

Hey guys, had a writing assignment to describe the person I cared about the most and what they mean to me. Let me know what you think!

Answer 1

This is regarding my wonderful girlfriend, who I am blessed to have. Her name is the essence of Hope. She embodies it like no one else. She is the one person I can fully open myself up to. She’s my lover, my best friend, my advisor, my rock of support, and my anchor in life. She’s intelligent, loyal, honest, tenacious, loving, kind, pure, passionate, amazing, and drop-dead gorgeous, while also being adorably heart-melting. She makes me feel invincible, unbreakable, hard as titanium. Paradoxically, she also makes me feel vulnerable, not really weak per se, but like I can let my guard down.

She looks at me with a kindness and affection that is reserved only for me and just causes my heart to melt every single time. She has seen my flaws and accepts them just as much as she accepts my strengths. She always offers her support and encouragement. She motivates me to be better each and every day. She has entrusted me with her entire heart and love and allowed me to be a part of her of her life as much as she can.

Her hair is long, wavy, luxurious, and as golden as jewelry, as warm and bright as fire. Her green eyes are stunning, entrancing, more awesome than the most beautiful galaxies. Her smile is brighter than a thousand suns, and capable of powering all of America alone. Her mind is more vibrate than an aurora, sharp as steel, and quick as lightning. Her personality is more vibrate than the sunrise and as peaceful as an oasis. Her laughter is one of the most musical things I’ve ever heard, and her voice is one of my favorite things to listen to. Overall, she’s absolutely breathtaking.

I still remember the first time we had talked. It was via text and I didn't know what she had looked like at the time. However, her kindness had drawn me to her and I found her intriguing. At the time, I was a bit of an enigma to her. So we started chatting, asking each other questions to get to know one another. Over the course of a few days, we had grown close and the questions just kept on coming, getting deeper and more intimate. When she finally revealed what she looked like, I was very impressed. But the memory is special for me because I didn't fall for her attractiveness first like most people. I fell in love with her intellectually and emotionally. Essentially it was a meeting of the mind and soul.

I love her with the most pure and strongest form of love. I love her physically, emotionally, mentally, and spiritually. I see her for who she is and who she has the potential to be. I love her more than anyone I have loved or ever will love. She is my first love and my only love. She’s the kind of person I could love forever; distance and time can do nothing to diminish it because our connection is eternal. She’s the one person I want to marry, protect, and love forever.

Our love is truly special. I've never felt the way I do for her, for anyone else. If she needs attention, I'm always there to provide it. If she needs support, I'm the person she can always rely on. If she ever feels depressed or feels that she can't go on, or that she's not good enough, I'm there to pull her out of her emotional distress and remind her how awesome she is.

Love is about mutual understanding, sacrifice, affection, responsibility, loyalty, and honesty. It's not like some people's definition of love where they think, "Wow! This person is really hot and I would love to be with them."
That's more of an infatuation.

My definition of love, is loving her completely and utterly, with 100% of my passion and loyalty. It's seeing them for who they truly are but also more than that; it means seeing the best version of themselves and encouraging them to reach that potential. It's realizing that not everything will be sunshine and rainbows, and that there will be tough times ahead, but accepting it regardless and loving them anyway, being completely devoted to them. It's wanting to protect them from everything and making them feel safe, to the point where you would put yourself between them and danger without a second thought, with zero hesitation. It's realizing that you want to spend the rest of your life with them, experiencing the good times and the bad times, and loving them every second of it.

Often times, people fear the future, especially because it is often uncertain. It’s scary and thrilling at the same time. But no matter what happens, I’m always going to love her. I’ve given her my heart and it belongs to her solely; it’s hers to use. I love her utterly and completely and she feels the same way about me.

Whenever we’re apart, it’s like we can’t breathe. A portion of us is gone and we can’t get a moment’s peace until we’re reunited. And when we do meet up, everything comes alive. We feel at peace and our connection gets brighter than supernova. Due to different circumstances, we can't see each other all the time and she sometimes feels guilty about that. I know she has her responsibilities and I usually don't mind if she has to cancel plans, because I want her to succeed at everything she does. Sometimes that means cancelling plans. It's okay though, because I'm willing to wait for her.

The nights we do meet up, are magical though. It feels amazing and brings me a euphoric joy. I love talking with her, caring for her, showing my love to her. I don't open up to a lot of people, but for her, she sees more than almost anyone. Being with her makes me feel alive and she's just an amazing person to be around. I cherish every moment we share together and look forward to many more.

One of the reasons we fit so well together is because we complete each other. I’m a natural pessimist but she's the hopeful optimist; she is more emotional, and I am more of a thinker; she had tons of friends but didn’t have a special partner who would care for her and remain loyal, while I’m a bit of an outcast who values loyalty highly and spoils her with all my care and affection; I'm vengeance and she's mercy; I'm more judgmental and she's more understanding; I’m the night and she’s the moon; you all get the idea.

Regardless of what happens, we’re going to be together; we’re going to get married, have a life full of joy, and ride off into the sunset. I know, sounds a bit optimistic for a pessimist, right? I mean, how could anyone know that for sure? I don’t need to know. Some things in life, are worth the risk because one has a belief and a trust in something that no one else does that only they can see and knows has a genuine chance of happening. I don’t know anything for certain, but I don’t need to. We don’t need to know how the future will play out with 100% certainty. It doesn’t take absolute knowledge for our relationship to work.

All it takes is a leap of faith. All we need is faith, love, and commitment and that's enough.

As I write this, feeling like crap because of a minor cold, I feel blessed to know that she cares about me, and that I am the love of her life. I don't know if it's scientifically accurate to say that love is medicine, but any time I spend time with her, I feel better than before. If you're out there and you see this, thank you for being my special girl. I love you.

Answer 2

this is very nice. I can really feel that you put your whole heart into writing it. Your grammar is really good tbh. all in all, this is so sweet, and I hope the best for you and your girlfriend :)

Answer 3

Thank you very much!

Answer 4

That was absolutely beautiful. You did an phenomenal job and I admire this whole thing so much to the point I want a copy lol. Also I cried through most of it.

Answer 5

Thank you for the kind words!

Answer 6

This is actually really heartwarming, I have no complaints. This is excellent, really good job. I can tell you put a lot of emotion into this piece. Good job, I'd love to see more work from you. I think you'll get a good grade on your assignment.

Answer 7

this is actually amazing fabulous job my guy

Answer 8

holy cow this is amazing bruh i bet she would be overfilled with joy to read that and she would start crying tears of happiness/joy

Answer 9

Wow she is lucky to have you thats for sure it took me 8 minutes to read everything bout her