Question

Should I make any changes on the essay?

Answer 1

well part of the essay?

Answer 2

You should add at the end "is" right after "it" in the sentence ab disadvantages. Then right before "informed" add the word "being". Dont forget to close { " }this after the word "Arizona" Then you should be good.

Answer 3

wait wym by the add?

Answer 4

adding a word

Answer 5

wait where should i add it?

Answer 6

ohhhh

Answer 7

mean like ended up being in prison for ....?

Answer 8

no ok copy and paste that for me on here

Answer 9

like the whole text?

Answer 10

no the paragraph that u sent here

Answer 11

ohhh okay

Answer 12

Every year, Americans all over the world are able to defend themselves from what may or may not be false prosecution. That is what we call the Amendments. To me, the amendments are an advantage to protect U.S citizens from mainly criminal and civil laws, because I believe it gives society an opportunity to be informed of what could happen to you earlier in life, if you happened to disobey the laws. But the amendments can also be put at an disadvantage if it used against you without informed of what you can say or not say. For example, in the Supreme Court Case, ¨Miranda V Arizona¨, the defendant was not informed about his basic rights and ended up in prison.

Answer 13

Is that the whole essay or are you adding more?

Answer 14

Every year, Americans all over the world are able to defend themselves from what may or may not be false prosecution. That is what we call the Amendments. To me, the amendments are an advantage to protect U.S citizens from mainly criminal and civil laws, because I believe it gives society an opportunity to be informed of what could happen to you earlier in life, if you happened to disobey the laws. But the amendments can also be put at an disadvantage if it was used against you without informed of what you can say or not say. For example, in the Supreme Court Case, ¨Miranda V Arizona¨, the defendant was not informed about his basic rights and ended up in prison.

I added one word to that

Answer 15

Im adding more but im not finished

Answer 16

where did you add the word?

Answer 17

i need some serious feedback

Answer 18

Ah okay, so is this your 1st body paragraph, or grabber?

Answer 19

uh 1st paragraph?

Answer 20

I told u I added "was" after disadvantage "if it was"

Answer 21

oh okay thxs

Answer 22

Is this an opinion or information essay?

Answer 23

um i guess both at this point

Answer 24

You are trying to explain what amendments are? Is there a certain question that makes you write this essay?

Answer 25

no exactly

Answer 26

im just writing basic facts and kind of my opinions

Answer 27

also need excrutating details but cant be simple

Answer 28

But its about the amendments right? So kinda what they are?

Answer 29

yes I know but i need a 2-4 page essay with different facts

Answer 30

So I would personally add, Every year, Americans all over the world are able to defend themselves from what may or may not be false prosecution. That is what we call the Amendments. To me, the amendments are an advantage to protect U.S citizens from mainly criminal and civil laws, because I believe it gives society an opportunity to be informed of what could happen to you earlier in life, if you happened to disobey the laws. But the amendments can also be put at an disadvantage if it used against you without informed of what you can say or not say. For example, in the Supreme Court Case, ¨Miranda V Arizona¨, the defendant was not informed about his basic rights and ended up in prison.

You could add something like saying ¨The amendments are rules/laws that give everyone a fair opportunity when it comes to certain things and to make life better and more improving. Because of these amendments, you can say anything you want, but you are still limited, you can say ¨You like the color blue? That color is so bad¨ But you cannot say things like ¨If you do this I will hurt you¨ Because that is a threat. The amendments give us certain freedoms that are limited to a fair price.¨

Something like that, you can use that but you can change some things on it too.

Answer 31

ahhh yes than you k*

Answer 32

I think it looks fine

Answer 33

right lmao