I need some feedback on a plot idea I have. Sorry if it sounds stupid. Please ask questions if you need to.
God is upset with mankind so he sends an angel down to hell to recruit very certain demons and souls so he can unleash them on Earth and basically slaughter all man.
This is where I'm at right now I will be expanding onto this once I figure out some stuff

Question

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

is it just Men? or all of human species?

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@froggirlemmy wrote:

is it just Men? or all of human species?

Most of all humans

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

but, i think the plot its self is good i thinkit needs to have a little mre within the storyline itself but overall i like it so far. just add some more exiting parts!

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@froggirlemmy wrote:

but, i think the plot its self is good i thinkit needs to have a little mre within the storyline itself but overall i like it so far. just add some more exiting parts!

Alright!! That was just a summary there's a lot more I'm adding. Thank you!

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@froggirlemmy wrote:

but, i think the plot its self is good i thinkit needs to have a little mre within the storyline itself but overall i like it so far. just add some more exiting parts!

Alright!! That was just a summary there's a lot more I'm adding. Thank you!

your welcome, i love the things you make! keep up the good work!

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@froggirlemmy wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@froggirlemmy wrote:

but, i think the plot its self is good i thinkit needs to have a little mre within the storyline itself but overall i like it so far. just add some more exiting parts!

Alright!! That was just a summary there's a lot more I'm adding. Thank you!

your welcome, i love the things you make! keep up the good work!

Thank you so much!!

Joe348 · Answer

I would add punctuation's

Joe348 · Answer

Like God is upset with mankind so He sends an angel down to Hell to recruit very, certain demons and souls, so He can unleash them on Earth and slaughter every man.

Joe348 · Answer

Thats how i would re-arrange it

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@joe348 wrote:

Like God is upset with mankind so He sends an angel down to Hell to recruit very, certain demons and souls, so He can unleash them on Earth and slaughter every man.

Dawg I wasn't going to add punctuation cause that's a summary. A very simple summary if that

Joe348 · Answer

lol okay well good luck with ur work x.x

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@joe348 wrote:

lol okay well good luck with ur work x.x

Thank you, and sorry for sounding mean :(

Joe348 · Answer

nah its okay lol speak the way u speak

BrokenMoon · Answer

maybe make one of these demons the main charcter, or one of the people being slain, big plot twist at the end they die and turn into a demon

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@brokenmoon wrote:

maybe make one of these demons the main charcter, or one of the people being slain, big plot twist at the end they die and turn into a demon

That's a real good idea!! I'm gonna incorporate the demon being another main character into this :D

RodWav3 · Answer

add punctuation and be descriptive

JackX · Answer

keep being awesome

RodWav3 · Answer

@jackx wrote:

keep being awesome

yea that too

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@jackx wrote:

keep being awesome

Aww thank you

RodWav3 · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

oh ok

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

oh ok

Yeahh

JackX · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@jackx wrote:

keep being awesome

Aww thank you

your welcome

RodWav3 · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

oh ok

Yeahh

it dont look bat either

RodWav3 · Answer

@jackx wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@jackx wrote:

keep being awesome

Aww thank you

your welcome

yw

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

oh ok

Yeahh

it dont look bat either

Thanks dawg :)

RodWav3 · Answer

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

@afflatedanimism wrote:

@rodwav3 wrote:

add punctuation and be descriptive

I did a while back, also this is a plot summary oversimplified. The real plot is super long and has a lot of lore

oh ok

Yeahh

it dont look bat either

Thanks dawg :)

anytime

yomomalikebracobama · Answer

i would put : god no longer believes mankind kind continue to roam earth as they please ruining the very world he has created for us pollution our planet and doing nothing to change this so he took matters into his own hands and sent the strictest of his angels to the depths of hell to recruit eachand every sould to get rid oth the life for know as man.   
see if you add more detail it hooks the reader i really like medals btw ;)  @afflatedanimism

afflatedAnimism · Answer

@yomomalikebracobama wrote:

i would put : god no longer believes mankind kind continue to roam earth as they please ruining the very world he has created for us pollution our planet and doing nothing to change this so he took matters into his own hands and sent the strictest of his angels to the depths of hell to recruit eachand every sould to get rid oth the life for know as man. see if you add more detail it hooks the reader i really like medals btw ;) @afflatedanimism

Ty!!