Question

can I some tips or advice on my final art piece of the semester before i submit?

Answer 1

uh so, first off, uhm, whats it about? it seems deppressing, does it resemble you, or something youve been through? i feel its fine, im just a lil curious thats all. maybe try adding more details to teh face? what does the words say? are those things youve been called? whats the piece about? and also, i think its good, but as i said you might need some more details.

Answer 2

same thought here, and if the words do resemble some sort of like thought that the character/drawing is looking back at then i think you should put it in a thought bubble but that also forms in with the head of the person, if that makes sense

Answer 3

yesss that would look epic on her picture

Answer 4

Just a little thing, I think it's spelled "seeker" instead of "seaker," unless you did that on purpose. I really like your idea and I think it speaks to what many people go through.

Answer 5

Also "attention" should have two Ts, and "disappointment" needs to have two Ps and one S.

Answer 6

thank you i'm dyslexic

Answer 7

I think you can do better.

Answer 8

Okay, I shared my opinion if you don't like it must suck because I don't care...

Answer 9

I like the picture. The words, on my behalf, are a little hard to read, but that's just me. I think that if it reapresents some type of feeling that you've been having then it's good. I feel like there's a lot of open space to make it better. Like with all of the white space, you can add more words or more thoughts from the character. Overal it's a really good peice.

Answer 10

cool

Answer 11

keke sh stop spam now shut up, it may be hard but leave the question kiddo.

Answer 12

Good

Answer 13

Keep making more to it...

Answer 14

Maybe add value or color if your allowed? .o.

Answer 15

if the objective is to make a ugly depressing photo and your in 2nd grade then its great! ;)

Answer 16

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Answer 17

I agree that some colour would be good before sobmitting. Not bright colours- duh to the depressing nature of the picture- but maybe some blacks or greys as shading. I feel like if you made the words a bit darker they would be easier to read, (if that's just me you don't have to.) Maybe some more outline on the person because they sorta just dissapear, but it looks good if they are supposed to do that. I like your signature, but i feel like it's taking up some valueable space that you could use to add more details. Like a background or more depressing words. The hair on the charcter- it's good, but not the best- maybe add more to that aswell.