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dukedadon · Answer

Is there something else i could add to this introduction?

BriannaFloyd · Answer

what u need help wit?

FictionZystsem · Answer

Perhaps a description of the location, such as how it looks, or how the characters look.

0mega · Answer

Add something between how they got to the woods, cause doesn't it seem a bit weird how they wouldn't run into any trouble whilst going to the woods?

FictionZystsem · Answer

@0mega wrote:

Add something between how they got to the woods, cause doesn't it seem a bit weird how they wouldn't run into any trouble whilst going to the woods?

That would be a good idea to add to it too.

0mega · Answer

plus, going to the woods immediately after just being stuck in a crowded airport is a tad bit weird

dukedadon · Answer

@0mega wrote:

Add something between how they got to the woods, cause doesn't it seem a bit weird how they wouldn't run into any trouble whilst going to the woods?

I have thought of this, but i couldn't think of any real scenario

dukedadon · Answer

@0mega wrote:

plus, going to the woods immediately after just being stuck in a crowded airport is a tad bit weird

its the writing prompt for the homework assignment.

MidniteSunny · Answer

1) the A in and needs to be lowercase
2) be a bit more descriptive, this sounds a little bit too simplistic 
3) is this for an assignment ? if so, what r the directions for it ?

dukedadon · Answer

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dukedadon · Answer

here is the writing prompt.

0mega · Answer

@dukedadon wrote:

@0mega wrote:

Add something between how they got to the woods, cause doesn't it seem a bit weird how they wouldn't run into any trouble whilst going to the woods?

I have thought of this, but i couldn't think of any real scenario

something like, Kate and Mr. Jacks get thrown into a situation where the people looking for them chase them on foot, and how they had to make maneuvers into alleyways, and stores with back door exits, just use what comes to mind.

dukedadon · Answer

@0mega wrote:

@dukedadon wrote:

@0mega wrote:

Add something between how they got to the woods, cause doesn't it seem a bit weird how they wouldn't run into any trouble whilst going to the woods?

I have thought of this, but i couldn't think of any real scenario

something like, Kate and Mr. Jacks get thrown into a situation where the people looking for them chase them on foot, and how they had to make maneuvers into alleyways, and stores with back door exits, just use what comes to mind.

Hmm...maybe onto something.

0mega · Answer

Tom Clancy's Fallout (Splinter Cell) has a good opening chase scene to read on

dukedadon · Answer

@0mega wrote:

Tom Clancy's Fallout (Splinter Cell) has a good opening chase scene to read on

What does that have to do with my introduction?

0mega · Answer

see, if you're planning on a chase scene, you might as well read into other chase scenes

dukedadon · Answer

No, that is foolish and i shall not do that, nor reckon that.

quacker · Answer

@dukedadon wrote:

No, that is foolish and i shall not do that, nor reckon that.

boi i did this exact same thing

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