Question

hows my poem name: WE

We used to be the life of the party
We where the ones they wished they were
We where perfect to everyone but
We fought behind closed doors
We got to drunk and ended up lost
We cut to deep with each other
We would hook up just for fun
We used to be the life of the party
We where the ones they wished they were
We were just to crazy
We both want different things
We do nothing but yell and scream at one another
We cant live without our demons
We used to be the perfect thing
We both went different ways
We said I love you and it broke our friendship
We split and changed all over again
We lost our spark
We try so hard to ignore the rumors
We will always be two broken souls
We know to much
We saw to much
We used to be the life of the party
We were the ones they wished they were
We went out one night
We got to drunk
We kissed one another
We sparked up our chemistry
We are like to devils together
We will always be remembered as the wild ones
We can never be lovers
We can never be friends
We need to let go
We are to toxic for one another
We said those four letters broke us up
We lost our connection

Answer 1

I like this, but I just would refrain from using "we" in the start of literally every verse in this song. It's a bit repetitive.

Answer 2

thanks

Answer 3

I actually really do like this. I thought it was a bit stereotypical at first but I continued to read and I actually enjoyed it. Bravo to you.

Answer 4

Thanks

Answer 5

Good job. I like it.

Answer 6

Isn't it supposed to be `were` not `where`

Answer 7

it's good

Answer 8

yes lol it is

Answer 9

It's pretty good!!

Answer 10

thanks luv

Answer 11

this is the truth of teenage love and thats why i live it so much. at first i didn't like that it started with at ''we" but then i eased into it, i would love to see you do more?

Answer 12

aww ty

Answer 13

it nie

Answer 14

Very chaotic, i like how each line clashes against each other.

Answer 15

nice

Answer 16

really nice

Answer 17

That good girl keep it up !!!!!