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SaltTheLoser:
defend?
SaltTheLoser:
counter-attack?
DADDYROXY:
Fight back
DADDYROXY:
Defend :/
Marlee:
My original sentence is "Black bears do not want attacked back by humans"
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SaltTheLoser:
Huh? What does that mean?
iiXilosis:
charged
DADDYROXY:
Black bears do not want to be attacked by humans?
DADDYROXY:
Is the question saying to rephrase the sentence?
DADDYROXY:
@daddyroxy wrote:
Black bears do not want to be attacked by humans?
^ cuz this makes more sense
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Marlee:
yeah, that's what I mean
iiXilosis:
@marlee wrote:
My original sentence is "Black bears do not want attacked back by humans"
i'd change do not to don't
DADDYROXY:
Ok then use the sentence I put
Marlee:
I need a synonym for "attacked back/attacked" because I've used it way too many times in my essay.
marlinzzz:
I'd write it like this:
"Human retaliation against black bears is not safe or effective."
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SaltTheLoser:
Black bears dont want to be euthanized by humans?
iiXilosis:
invaded, bombed, besieged, bombarded
SaltTheLoser:
dont use those
DADDYROXY:
@salttheloser wrote:
Black bears dont want to be euthanized by humans?
This is better
DADDYROXY:
What’s ur essay about?
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iiXilosis:
they're all synonyms of attacked invaded wouldnt be bad
SaltTheLoser:
black bears dont want to be invaded by humans?
iiXilosis:
yeah
SaltTheLoser:
Sounds dumb
iiXilosis:
if you say so
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Marlee:
@daddyroxy wrote:
What’s ur essay about?
How bears are not aggressive
marlinzzz:
ohhhhh
SaltTheLoser:
Human deforestation and development is harmful and invasive to the black bear species??
SaltTheLoser:
that sounds better for invade
Marlee:
Would "they don't want to fight with humans" be fine? // It's part of the thesis
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SaltTheLoser:
terrible thesis
iiXilosis:
you could use raided
TonyCash:
they don't want to be overtook by humans
or tamed
SaltTheLoser:
If humans limited the interaction with black bears and took measures to conserve their habitats then the amount of aggressive encounters of black bears would lower. (makes a better thesis)
marlinzzz:
I think you should make the point that they are best left alone for their safety and for the safety of humans
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TonyCash:
@salttheloser wrote:
If humans limited the interaction with black bears and took measures to conserve their habitats then the amount of aggressive encounters of black bears would lower. (makes a better thesis)
yes but population would spread causing problems
SaltTheLoser:
do i look like i care
TonyCash:
@salttheloser wrote:
do i look like i care
just saying
SaltTheLoser:
this isnt an if situation its just a thesis suggestion based on her essay topic
TonyCash:
@salttheloser wrote:
this isnt an if situation its just a thesis suggestion based on her essay topic
exactally
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SaltTheLoser:
we aint here to discuss the growth of a bear population
TonyCash:
@salttheloser wrote:
we aint here to discuss the growth of a bear population
me neither, i'm stating the problem with humans and bears
TETSXPREME:
Retaliate
TETSXPREME:
Welcome To Questioncove!
Reciprocate
TonyCash:
@tetsxpreme wrote:
Retaliate
thats a good one
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SaltTheLoser:
thats not a remark for my suggestion either thats a topic for a body paragraph
TonyCash:
@salttheloser wrote:
thats not a remark for my suggestion either thats a topic for a body paragraph
very unethical
snowflake0531:
Since your essay is about how bears are not aggressive, talking about how black bears do not tolerate being attacked by humans should only be one reason, one paragraph of your essay, you shouldn't focus on it.
you should be using statistics and case studies to back your point, not an "if" statement, because your point right now only stands when a human attacks it