Question

My poem:

Anger, building up
Resisting my happiness to a still silent hum
Anger, is it better than desperation?
When would my anger slow to where no one would tell I’m angry?

Anger when you get in the way I wish
Wish that it could be bearable
When anger turns to pain
Pain hurts worse when it’s yourself inflicting it

Yet, there’s hope in me
Hope for a better me, a better self for everyone to love
For me to love and take care of when no one else can
When I get shoved down I’ll get back up with more force

Imagine it; me becoming stronger than the haters and cheaters and players
When people disrespect me I hope my inner-arrogance won’t come out
Fear overrules this hope though; when shall I believe that my hopefulness will kick in?
Now, I will when I saw my life flash in front of me, behind me, and in between me and you

Now I believe I can rise up
Above all hatred and betrayal
With everything going on, swirling on, living on as if nothing happens factures us everyday
Those people are fake as plastic, living a lie

When everyone else cracks I’ll be standing high above cuz’ now I know that I’m better than they label me
They label me as; needy, whiny, and unconfident
I’ll prove them wrong, tell them, show them

I’m so much better off without them
When will I become friendly enough to approach well, that's another thing
But right now we're gonna believe, right?

Answer 1

long ,but nice.

Answer 2

keep up the good work

Answer 3

yb better

Answer 4

Thanks lmao should I enter my districts writing contest?

Answer 5

Okay thanks yall

Answer 6

More like a song.
Interesting.
Wrong subject as well.

Answer 7

Oop sorry

Answer 8

good job 👍👍

Answer 9

this is really good! I feel like it seems more like a song, but songs are kinda like poems so i'll give you that lol.

great job!

Answer 10

Good job

Answer 11

👍👍👍👍

Answer 12

Good job!