Okay, I'm writing a horror story about a man named Todd. Todd is an abusive husband and long story short, he gets trapped inside a mansion. The mansion is owned by his wife who wants payback and causes pschological mysteries for her husband to solve. The mysteries are a story he must put together and the mansion is plagued by fear.

P.S. Todd tries to change during his abusive outburst but it's too late by the time his wife builds the deemed "Horror House." What ideas can you provide that I haven't already thought of?

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Okay, I'm writing a horror story about a man named Todd. Todd is an abusive husband and long story short, he gets trapped inside a mansion. The mansion is owned by his wife who wants payback and causes pschological mysteries for her husband to solve. The mysteries are a story he must put together and the mansion is plagued by fear.

P.S. Todd tries to change during his abusive outburst but it's too late by the time his wife builds the deemed "Horror House." What ideas can you provide that I haven't already thought of?

YRJ8498 · Answer

Thats fire
it kinda reminds me of "THE ELECTRIC HOTEL"

CYBER257 · Answer

@yrj8498 wrote:

Thats fire it kinda reminds me of "THE ELECTRIC HOTEL"

Thank you

Oreo1234 · Answer

It's a good story. I don't think u needa add anything

CYBER257 · Answer

@oreo1234 wrote:

It's a good story. I don't think u needa add anything

Awesome. Thanks for feedback!

hhanan · Answer

I think you should add a part were she cuts of his finger and makes him eat it

Oreo1234 · Answer

uhmmmmmm

CYBER257 · Answer

@hhanan wrote:

I think you should add a part were she cuts of his finger and makes him eat it

No thanks.

YRJ8498 · Answer

@yrj8498 wrote:

Thats fire it kinda reminds me of "THE ELECTRIC HOTEL"

but some ideas is the wife should have some crazy dangerous pet animal you know and should already be hated by the whole town

hhanan · Answer

@cyber257 wrote:

@hhanan wrote:

I think you should add a part were she cuts of his finger and makes him eat it

No thanks.

why tho

YRJ8498 · Answer

@hhanan wrote:

I think you should add a part were she cuts of his finger and makes him eat it

wth?

CYBER257 · Answer

@hhanan wrote:

@cyber257 wrote:

@hhanan wrote:

I think you should add a part were she cuts of his finger and makes him eat it

No thanks.

why tho

No.

CyanideTooCut · Answer

Beautiful! Splendid! I wish this was a whole chapter book! Keep up the good work! 🧡🧡

UrHawtieIsHere4U · Answer

Nice.

CYBER257 · Answer

@cyanidetoocut wrote:

Beautiful! Splendid! I wish this was a whole chapter book! Keep up the good work! 🧡🧡

This will be 80 chapters no cap

YRJ8498 · Answer

@cyber257 wrote:

@cyanidetoocut wrote:

Beautiful! Splendid! I wish this was a whole chapter book! Keep up the good work! 🧡🧡

This will be 80 chapters no cap

dang

CyanideTooCut · Answer

@cyber257 wrote:

@cyanidetoocut wrote:

Beautiful! Splendid! I wish this was a whole chapter book! Keep up the good work! 🧡🧡

This will be 80 chapters no cap

Ohhh bett 😈

CYBER257 · Answer

I hope it gets tons of ratings. My first horror won a medal so that's good.

TheWraith2021 · Answer

This sounds like a really interesting idea. The only thing I'd recommend is that the story he has to put together will somehow mirror his own. His every act of cruelty, mistrust, and abuse needs to be brought up and over-emphasized by this story. This needs to be his own personal hell that he feels he can't escape from. Maybe have him get drugged with an hallucinogen when he awakes in this House of Horrors that way he can be even more psychologically tormented with flashbacks and hallucinatory visions.

AddyM · Answer

@thewraith2021 wrote:

This sounds like a really interesting idea. The only thing I'd recommend is that the story he has to put together will somehow mirror his own. His every act of cruelty, mistrust, and abuse needs to be brought up and over-emphasized by this story. This needs to be his own personal hell that he feels he can't escape from. Maybe have him get drugged with an hallucinogen when he awakes in this House of Horrors that way he can be even more psychologically tormented with flashbacks and hallucinatory visions.

yes this owuld be a great addition. maybe try having a a room towards the ned just be full of mirrios and the wife is in the reflections saying things like "you did this to your slef" or youre a monster or something crepy like that.

izabelDB · Answer

that is sick maybe it can be like a love story but mixed w/ merder mistory

CYBER257 · Answer

@thewraith2021 wrote:

This sounds like a really interesting idea. The only thing I'd recommend is that the story he has to put together will somehow mirror his own. His every act of cruelty, mistrust, and abuse needs to be brought up and over-emphasized by this story. This needs to be his own personal hell that he feels he can't escape from. Maybe have him get drugged with an hallucinogen when he awakes in this House of Horrors that way he can be even more psychologically tormented with flashbacks and hallucinatory visions.

That's a great idea man. Thanks!

AddyM · Answer

@izabeldb wrote:

that is sick maybe it can be like a love story but mixed w/ merder mistory

i mean iit is a horror story so

AddyM · Answer

@izabeldb wrote:

that is sick maybe it can be like a love story but mixed w/ merder mistory

alao a love stoy wouldnt work becase shes punishing her abusive husabd

izabelDB · Answer

ok i get it now

Vengeance12 · Answer

@addym wrote:

@izabeldb wrote:

that is sick maybe it can be like a love story but mixed w/ merder mistory

alao a love stoy wouldnt work becase shes punishing her abusive husabd

Yeah that sounds like a horrid idea. Plus neither of you can spell I mean DAMN.

AddyM · Answer

@vengeance12 wrote:

@addym wrote:

@izabeldb wrote:

that is sick maybe it can be like a love story but mixed w/ merder mistory

alao a love stoy wouldnt work becase shes punishing her abusive husabd

Yeah that sounds like a horrid idea. Plus neither of you can spell I mean DAMN.

i cant spell when im typing quickly so sorry i guess also they literally said its about the wife punishing the abusive ex husband soooo i think its a good idea and if you dont like it then leave i guess

DemonkingYoongi · Answer

kinda reminds me of a stephen king movie

Ava1 · Answer

good job