Once upon a time there was a little girl that felt she wasn’t good enough, she tried everything and still couldn’t make it up to anyone. Until one day she made up a lie and said that she her parents died. We all remember the story called “The boy who called wolf” right? Well, her story is kind of the same.

She would go to school saying her parents died, to the store, to her hometown everywhere and everyone believed her, but she felt bad and tried to tell everyone the truth but one day she didn’t have to. This one Boy at her school already knew she was lying so he called her out in front of everyone. She kept repeating “MY PARENTS ARE MY PARENTS ARE DEAD”. The boy of course had brought the parents to school that day. She felt pressured and cried “IM SORRY IM SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME” but no one forgave her for her lies and stupidity.

Written by Lana

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Once upon a time there was a little girl that felt she wasn’t good enough, she tried everything and still couldn’t make it up to anyone. Until one day she made up a lie and said that she her parents died. We all remember the story called “The boy who called wolf” right? Well, her story is kind of the same.

She would go to school saying her parents died, to the store, to her hometown everywhere and everyone believed her, but she felt bad and tried to tell everyone the truth but one day she didn’t have to. This one Boy at her school already knew she was lying so he called her out in front of everyone. She kept repeating “MY PARENTS ARE MY PARENTS ARE DEAD”. The boy of course had brought the parents to school that day. She felt pressured and cried “IM SORRY IM SORRY PLEASE FORGIVE ME” but no one forgave her for her lies and stupidity.

Written by Lana

Scorpion13 · Answer

Great story

kaciecowee25 · Answer

Good job, keep it up!

LandonGoma · Answer

THANK YOU ALL

maths89898 · Answer

Good story, do you want criticism?

LandonGoma · Answer

@maths89898 wrote:

Good story, do you want criticism?

Go ahead always could use some

maths89898 · Answer

@landongoma wrote:

@maths89898 wrote:

Good story, do you want criticism?

Go ahead always could use some

Alright sure

maths89898 · Answer

I'd advise you to be more creative with your writing,use larger words to make your tale flow more smoothly, and make the plot twist a bigger moment make it dramatic and huge for the drama. I'm not an expert, but I hope my advice helps you a little.

LandonGoma · Answer

@maths89898 wrote:

I'd advise you to be more creative with your writing,use larger words to make your tale flow more smoothly, and make the plot twist a bigger moment make it dramatic and huge for the drama. I'm not an expert, but I hope my advice helps you a little.

Actaully it does help so thank you

maths89898 · Answer

@landongoma wrote:

@maths89898 wrote:

I'd advise you to be more creative with your writing,use larger words to make your tale flow more smoothly, and make the plot twist a bigger moment make it dramatic and huge for the drama. I'm not an expert, but I hope my advice helps you a little.

Actaully it does help so thank you

Of course! Have a good day

LandonGoma · Answer

@maths89898 wrote:

@landongoma wrote:

@maths89898 wrote:

I'd advise you to be more creative with your writing,use larger words to make your tale flow more smoothly, and make the plot twist a bigger moment make it dramatic and huge for the drama. I'm not an expert, but I hope my advice helps you a little.

Actaully it does help so thank you

Of course! Have a good day

you too

baddestgirl · Answer

It's * lovely* and I hope you keep writing more like these beautiful friend 🏵️ keep up the great work!! Tbh 🤘🦢

LandonGoma · Answer

thank you

baddestgirl · Answer

You are welcome bestie 💙

oopdontknowher · Answer

this is amazing keep going!!

suger · Answer

you got this bsf

LandonGoma · Answer

THANK YOU ALL