Question

I don't understand the world in these times. My mind spinning round and round, every second that goes by I barely grasp the existence of reality. My eyes are full of color not at all milky white yet my vision blurred to life itself. I wander around this world barely making it through the day, My mind wandering just as much as my feet the first day at a new school. The voices in my head all screaming at once . Not one of them dared be silenced. People all around me yet I still feel so alone. You ask me if I need someone to speak to, I'll tell you no. My heart beats irregularly every thought passing through my mind, the pain I feel there never letting up. My past stuck to me like the skin I'm in, so fragile and so weak but strong enough to hold these dark secrets. The past pain I put myself through… the voices there again are every bit as loud as the tear running down my cheek… dont cry I tell myself don't get emotional. Each time breaking into a million parts.. each time saying the wrong thing. I try desperately to talk my words fumbling over themself my frustration growing in the fact I can't get my words out right… finally I find the right words in anger I shout them, escalating the situation.. making life harder for me,my mouth running before my brain saying things in all the wrong ways. In all the wrong tones, and for a second I forget what i’m saying yet my mouth is still running, digging a deer pit for me to sit in later.. Hurting the ones I love leaving only me to blame for things i’ve done or wrongful actions I took. My mind is still wondering if I will break again today.








I wrote this, I would like to know if there is anything I should add or fix

Answer 1

jay i love u <3

Answer 2

This is good, but I do have a little bit to say. I would fix the punctuation, but other than that, this is great.

Answer 3

Sad but I like it. Beautful.

Answer 4

its sad but its good. 10//10.

Answer 5

literallyyyyy so relatable