i had to write a poem for an assignment, so i wrote about the subject that has been on my mind what do you think?

Love hurts

When i see your face it is as though you have fallen from grace
The words you say or as though kisses upon my face
You touch me without touch
You make my heart soar without wings
If i knew your voice it would most likely make my ears ring

But you hid, do you lie?
If so why
With your silence brings me pain
The unanswered questions curse my name
Never to know whether you want to live or die
Does nothing but kill me inside
I know you do not wish to bring me pain
But if you were to leave me me heart would never be the same
You see this is why i worry so
Love hurts, don’t you know?
In my dreams you lie with me when i awake your across the sea
Will I ever see you in this lifetime?
Love hurts that is why i cry
When you hurt yourself your hurting me to
Cut by cut, till im black and blue
Love hurts my dear don't you
Yet i still love you so

Question

i had to write a poem for an assignment, so i wrote about the subject that has been on my mind what do you think?

Love hurts

When i see your face it is as though you have fallen from grace
The words you say or as though kisses upon my face
You touch me without touch
You make my heart soar without wings
If i knew your voice it would most likely make my ears ring

But you hid, do you lie?
If so why
With your silence brings me pain
The unanswered questions curse my name
Never to know whether you want to live or die
Does nothing but kill me inside
I know you do not wish to bring me pain
But if you were to leave me me heart would never be the same
You see this is why i worry so
Love hurts, don’t you know?
In my dreams you lie with me when i awake your across the sea
Will I ever see you in this lifetime?
Love hurts that is why i cry
When you hurt yourself your hurting me to
Cut by cut, till im black and blue
Love hurts my dear don't you
Yet i still love you so

Tonycoolkid21 · Answer

soo good

JadynB · Answer

@tonycoolkid21 wrote:

soo good

thx

BabygirlAshley · Answer

Spelling correct, perfect rhymes perfect. and the poem its self is awesome...

Bigdickbrain · Answer

Jaydn can rub your Cake pls I got a 10inch d😈
8137502411

Bigdickbrain · Answer

There so big just want to lick dem👅(. )( .)

Riah1 · Answer

@bigdickbrain wrote:

There so big just want to lick dem👅(. )( .)

learn some respect, you could at least say hi first, dang.

JadynB · Answer

can you guys just stop, this is not what the site is for

Riah1 · Answer

@bigdickbrain wrote:

Jaydn can rub your Cake pls I got a 10inch d😈 8137502411

can you learn how to have a conversation first, and learn how to respect women

JadynB · Answer

@bigdickbrain wrote:

Jaydn can rub your Cake pls I got a 10inch d😈 8137502411

youd didnt even spell my name right Chicken bag

JadynB · Answer

dou che

JadynB · Answer

not chicken

JadynB · Answer

mabye you should actually grow some and ask a girl out, instead of living in your moms basment until your 56 like the loser you are pleasureing yourself to picturese of 13 YEAR OLD GIRLS!!!

hunter3506 · Answer

hey yall chill out he is just being one of the very many creeps on here. on the other hand i love it you should really start doing this for a living because alll of you writings are amazing keep it up girl!!!!!<33

JadynB · Answer

thx hunter

hunter3506 · Answer

@jadynb wrote:

thx hunter

any day girl all of us well most of us are here for you<<33

JadynB · Answer

@hunter3506 wrote:

@jadynb wrote:

thx hunter

any day girl all of us well most of us are here for you<<33

thx your sweet

hunter3506 · Answer

i try to be

EchoOfAnArtist · Answer

beautiful.

TheWraith2021 · Answer

@bigdickbrain wrote:

Jaydn can rub your Cake pls I got a 10inch d😈 8137502411

To put it bluntly, I can see where you got your name from. You are rather embarrassing due to your lack of control and display of your apparent lifestyle that is modeled after the Simp Nation. I also imagine you probably hang out at a place I refer to as Cretin Central. Overall, you have no game, no flirting skills, and are the definition of inconsequential. And you have a "10inch d"? No offense, (actually, yes, with the utmost intended offense) we all know that if a guy has certain equipment that is above average, he doesn't need to brag about it. In fact, it comes off as though you are desperate for validation--therefore, I have a theory that says you're actually the size of a LEGO man down there. By the way, I thought your poem was good @JadynB

hunter3506 · Answer

@thewraith2021 wrote:

@bigdickbrain wrote:

Jaydn can rub your Cake pls I got a 10inch d😈 8137502411

To put it bluntly, I can see where you got your name from. You are rather embarrassing due to your lack of control and display of your apparent lifestyle that is modeled after the Simp Nation. I also imagine you probably hang out at a place I refer to as Cretin Central. Overall, you have no game, no flirting skills, and are the definition of inconsequential. And you have a "10inch d"? No offense, (actually, yes, with the utmost intended offense) we all know that if a guy has certain equipment that is above average, he doesn't need to brag about it. In fact, it comes off as though you are desperate for validation--therefore, I have a theory that says you're actually the size of a LEGO man down there. By the way, I thought your poem was good @JadynB

very well said dude that is prob true but funny at the same time

selenass · Answer

the beginning is nice

Alex1513 · Answer

This is great wow

oopdontknowher · Answer

omggg this is amazing i love it

LandonGoma · Answer

I love it a lot! maybe we can work together on poems on day.

JadynB · Answer

@landongoma wrote:

I love it a lot! maybe we can work together on poems on day.

i would love too!

LandonGoma · Answer

@jadynb wrote:

@landongoma wrote:

I love it a lot! maybe we can work together on poems on day.

i would love too!

anytime

jashubs · Answer

nice poem xoxo

cutebunny123 · Answer

Good Job. I love this while I was reading this I was smiling. Keep up the great work!

JadynB · Answer

@cutebunny123 wrote:

Good Job. I love this while I was reading this I was smiling. Keep up the great work!

thank you so much i love to spread joy, and or help people exspress themselves and their feelings!

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

very nice, this poem expresses a lot of feelings. If you can express feeling you can figure out or determine precisely the Way of life its self. Keep up the good work.👌

xxDeppressionxx · Answer

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xxDeppressionxx · Answer

Peoms are of way of expressing rhythm and along with music and writing. Likewise you are more headed to a great future if you become a poet.

oopdontknowher · Answer

love itt!!

Axelotle · Answer

love it, i give it a 1000/10, thats rlly deep!! <3

TheLoyalMan123 · Answer

NOW THATS A POEM THE OTHER GIRL WASNT THAT MUCH OF A POEM BABYGIRL SOMTHING.BUT U BRAVO THAT IS AN AMAZING POEM IT HAS RHYME,RHYTHM,EMOTION,BEAT,FEELING,IT SHOWS PASSION ITS 👌PERFECT .YOU HAVE TALENT IM VERY IMPRESSED CONGRATULATIONS THAT POEM IS AMAZING ONE OF THE BEST IVE HEARD.

CSimpola · Answer

Love you made me start to make my own.

CSimpola · Answer

@csimpola wrote:

Love you made me start to make my own.

love it*