Question

How do you like my poem. There are 3 more. Kinda like chapters. It's about a woman who is being abused. PS its NOT a true story. However... it could be. Think about that.
Rate it however you want. I don't care if you say it's trash but be honest about it.

Poem 1 The Hole 1 Voices

There was a hole in the ground
When I first saw it, I didn't know what it was,
It was as pitch as black
Looking inside I saw nothing,
darkness.
So I walked away,
I tried to at least.
The next day,
I saw the hole again,
But this time it spoke to me.
"Come. Come look inside."
It was a whisper.
I knew what was inside,
nothing
But I felt a force drawing me close.
I looked inside and saw something
That something was me.
Memory by memory
Bruise by bruise
Tear by tear,
I fell in
In that complete darkness
And silenced...

Answer 1

Bro...SO relatable

Answer 2

Beautiful!

Answer 3

Perfect you should publish that:))

Answer 4

nice nice
u can get rich keep doing it youll get famoa one day💵💵💵💵💵

Answer 5

Thannnnkkkkksssss.

Answer 6

nice c;

Answer 7

Very talented. < 3

Answer 8

niceeee!