So I wrote this songs for special ppl

{Verse 1}

Breaking hearts slowly that’s what you do
If only I could build a time machine
To take me back
When I was 19
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you were going to be so bitter
Lying to me is the worse you could do
Thought we were the perfect two

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time

{Verse 2}

Staring into the mirror
Looking into the scars of my past
Remembering the look you first gave me
When I was 13
Going on 14
You were there on my birthday
When you cared
Where are you now?
Where are you now?
But when I forgive you
There you go again stabbing me in the back again

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time

{Bridge}

Break my heart again
It’s alright
Tear me open again
I’ll be just fine
Fake your love
It gives me light
Kiss me and look at another
I’m smiling
And when I see you leaving I die
Thinking “How could you treat me this way?”

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time…
Every time….

Question

So I wrote this songs for special ppl

{Verse 1}

Breaking hearts slowly that’s what you do
If only I could build a time machine
To take me back
When I was 19
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you were going to be so bitter
Lying to me is the worse you could do
Thought we were the perfect two

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve 
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time

{Verse 2}

Staring into the mirror
Looking into the scars of my past
Remembering the look you first gave me 
When I was 13
Going on 14 
You were there on my birthday
When you cared
Where are you now?
Where are you now?
But when I forgive you 
There you go again stabbing me in the back again

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve 
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time

{Bridge}
 
Break my heart again
It’s alright
Tear me open again 
I’ll be just fine
Fake your love
It gives me light
Kiss me and look at another
I’m smiling
And when I see you leaving I die
Thinking “How could you treat me this way?”

{Chorus}

And all the while I think of you
You were breaking hearts, but I needed you
Feel like I got issues
"Sorry" you lied
"It's fine" I cried,
Breaking hearts when I needed you...
I would've pulled the trigger
If I knew you'd be so bitter...
Take me back when I was 19
I wish I wasn’t so naïve 
But you’ve been on my mind every time
Every time…
Every time….

Aboveusonlysky52 · Answer

i love it its really good keep up the good work

CripQUEZZ · Answer

special ppl as in special ed?

suger · Answer

wow i like it Picasso

Walen · Answer

i hate it bad music git gud

suger · Answer

@walen wrote:

i hate it bad music git gud

tell me ur joking

Walen · Answer

im not joking im walen

CripQUEZZ · Answer

trash

CripQUEZZ · Answer

Lame tamato tamato

suger · Answer

don't listen to them their just rude you did really good

CripQUEZZ · Answer

u didnt LMAO

CripQUEZZ · Answer

get gud kiddo

suger · Answer

@cripquezz wrote:

u didnt LMAO

shut the hell up and stop being rude

suger · Answer

you did great

CripQUEZZ · Answer

@suger wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

u didnt LMAO

shut the hell up and stop being rude

being honest with them

suger · Answer

just don't listen to the negative comments

404 · Answer

@cripquezz wrote:

@suger wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

u didnt LMAO

shut the hell up and stop being rude

being honest with them

It's okay if people criticize my work, but do NOT say it's garbage, if you don't mind, tell what's wrong with it.

suger · Answer

i think you did amazing

CripQUEZZ · Answer

@404 wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

@suger wrote:

@cripquezz wrote:

u didnt LMAO

shut the hell up and stop being rude

being honest with them

It's okay if people criticize my work, but do NOT say it's garbage, if you don't mind, tell what's wrong with it.

its horrible

Walen · Answer

it's bad thats my opinion

suger · Answer

@walen wrote:

it's bad thats my opinion

don't mean she has to listen to it

404 · Answer

We will not continue this conversation any further, Thank you.

Walen · Answer

so this was posted just to get good reactions out of ppl? Im telling the truth it isnt good

schoolishardong · Answer

if you didn't say this was a song i would have thought it was a book

404 · Answer

Thank you for your response I appreciate it, I tend to "over do it" I suppose?

Sharkattack123 · Answer

very nice

cutebunny123 · Answer

I respect this, I love it so much. You did a wonderful job. Keep up the amazing job. I'm looking forward to reading more stuff from you!

cbfitz46578 · Answer

hey, everyone has a right to their own opinion. And it's their free will to emphasize it. it's okay to say that you don't like something or the way that something is presented. It's also okay to say that you like something that one or two may not. honestly, in my opinion, i think that it is good, but not great. i feel like you should take some of the bad criticism to heart. Mainly because it can help you tap into more deep emotions. i think that the only thing that you are missing, in your writing is a little heart. when writing, even if it's not meant to be serious, or if it is, i believe that it should show the heart and soul of the person who has written it. i believe that you have the passion and the skill, you just need a little bit more motivation. maybe change up the wording a little bit. like using bigger words, or being specific to a certain feeling. when i was reading this, i could see your message and the feelings. but i shouldn't have to just being seeing it, i have to feel it. you have great potential, just tap into it.

cutebunny123 · Answer

Hey!
I really like this, it's really creative and it really touches me.  Keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to reading more stuff from you.

selenass · Answer

nice

Alex1513 · Answer

This is pretty great who is going to sing it

CrackedNuts · Answer

This is so beautiful! do moree

cecy · Answer

DO MORE i love it.It is from the heart

Jake15 · Answer

love it you this should be your passion or job i will go to your concerts 5 stars or 200 lol good job

KhrisOnly123 · Answer

i love this

keriya · Answer

u gotta be able to take honesty and haters

Sam360 · Answer

it's really good!

BigCeoJay · Answer

fire

Aubrie999 · Answer

lol i like it

404 · Answer

OHH SORRRY

404 · Answer

I DIDN'T MEAN TO SUBMIT IT