poem by me

"Unmotivated"

Living in a giant world in where everything feels the same , waking up every morning to the useless version of me i have to maintain as i get dressed and ask tell myself in shame "this day is going to be nothing but a drain"

Walking outside my home in this cold weather of rain doing nothing but looking at the ground and thinking... "today is just going to remain the same as all those other days just sitting in a small class were people barley know my name yet they all hate me either way"

walking closer and closer to this school i hate opening the gates and walking up the stairs to a group of people who see me as nothing but a creature to hate...

as the time passes and ticks to my open my eyes to see a faint black and white vision of school around me as i talk to myself and say "i want to be saved from the circle of pain i lay" from every second i feel myself become weaker and weaker...

to the shell of myself a non-believer... i lost the strength to fight... to wake up... to even try i am unmotivated one...

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poem by me

"Unmotivated"

Living in a giant world in where everything feels the same , waking up every morning to the useless version of me i have to maintain as i get dressed and ask tell myself in shame "this day is going to be nothing but a  drain"

Walking outside my home in this cold weather of rain doing nothing but looking at the ground and thinking... "today is just going to remain the same as all those other days just sitting in a small class were people barley know my name yet they all hate me either way"

walking closer and closer to this school i hate opening the gates and walking up the stairs to a group of people who see me as nothing but a creature to hate...

as the time passes and ticks to my open my eyes to see a faint black and white vision of school around me as i talk to myself and say "i want to be saved from the circle of pain i lay" from every second i feel myself become weaker and weaker...

to the shell of myself a non-believer... i lost the strength to fight... to wake up... to even try i am unmotivated one...

Sherixn · Answer

I really love the rhythm and the rhyme. Good job!

Colbyshep · Answer

good job its great

Sherixn · Answer

If u need someone to talk to I'm sure u can reach out to one of us <3

Axolotl · Answer

WOW, THIS IS AN AMAZINGLY WRITTEN POEM!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!! QC is here to help you if you need it :)))))

1008426 · Answer

Thats really good

Ilikefeet · Answer

Oh wow this is really detailed, i feel what your trying to say, i feel your emotions as i read the the poem, its good . :)

semilore · Answer

Good job friendo!! i like how it rhymes ^^

koenko · Answer

im so sorry i hope it gets better

cbfitz46578 · Answer

can you post a comment in the comment section, so that i can award you with a 'best answer' mallet-plaque..?

7469838583 · Answer

@cbfitz46578 wrote:

can you post a comment in the comment section, so that i can award you with a 'best answer' mallet-plaque..?

wait... me?

cbfitz46578 · Answer

@7469838583 wrote:

@cbfitz46578 wrote:

can you post a comment in the comment section, so that i can award you with a 'best answer' mallet-plaque..?

wait... me?

yes, you. though your writing was simple or small, it was still very good.

domian · Answer

Got em

Piffi · Answer

cooolll~

BigCeoJay · Answer

cool

BigCeoJay · Answer

re read it i love even more

OLIVER69 · Answer

amazing. < 3