Question

MY POEM . . .




Love
Love is like a light
When the light is green thats love
But when the light is off the love is gone
It's hard to love someone quickly
Even if you know them for a month or a year
It take time because if you fall in love quickly
It will be gone quickly
You can’t just stop loving someone
It takes time to stop loving them
And when you stop loving someone you start to miss them
It hurts when you miss them and they move on quicker then you do


Tell me whatcha think

Answer 1

@jordynthealien

Answer 2

i like it

Answer 3

love it

Answer 4

np

Answer 5

L

Answer 6

This is pretty good, but do you take constructive criticism? Yes? No? My criticism isn't going to hurt hopefully, as I'm sharing this anyway.
At the part where it says:

"It takes time to stop loving them
And when you stop loving someone you start to miss them"

it could say something like:

It takes time to stop loving them
And when you do you start to miss them

It's not a requirement it's a suggestion- 😅
But it makes the phrase "love" seem repeated when it's like the way it is right now.
Other than that it's great.

Answer 7

I like the characteristics of this poem; and excellent words that you've used.

Answer 8

This poem is gorgeous it made me feel a connection to the poem and made me feel warm inside

Answer 9

Wonderful poem I love everything about it, can't wait to see more.

Answer 10

1000000000000000/10 good

Answer 11

Its great