Question

Wrote this poem for ELA class

Wrote it for my older sis who isn't here, she's overseas.
Poem: Loud,oh so loud


Oh, it's so loud.

No longer is she protecting me, shielding my ears.

Answer 1

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Answer 2

Which poem?

Answer 3

Wrote this poem for ELA class

Wrote it for my older sis who isn't here, she's overseas.
Poem: Loud,oh so loud

Oh, it's so loud.

No longer is she protecting me, shielding my ears.

The voices grow louder each minute, feeding on my fear.

No longer is she wiping my eyes when they have wept when the voices get overbearing.

Please, come back, I feel as if though my heart is already tearing.

Oh, it's so loud, but the yelling voices that bicker are too much.

But all I need is you here and your warm loving touch.

The useless arguments ring through this small room.

It's scaring me, they're scaring me.

It makes it seem like I've been led to my doom.

She isn't here to soothe my fear with her milk honey-laced words.

I know, it sounds crazy or perhaps absurd.

My tears began to blind me, my vision is now blurred.

Oh, please make it stop big sister, please.

Come back and cover my ears, shield me!

These hurtful venomous words, cut through me. Wipe away my warm tears filled with fear, drown me in your soothing voice. For it was all that rendered making them disappear.

But now these voices yell, they are as sharp as a newly bought knife.

They tare through my skin ripping my confidence and self-worth, shredding it to nothing. Leaving me with no meaning to life.

Please, come back and protect me.

I need you, I can't remember the feeling of comfort you gave me when you spoke.

The voices, were angered, it's something I had dared not to provoke.

But now your comforting voice is all but nothingness to me, it's forgotten.

The ripeness of your touch and voice is now rotten.

Please come back and speak with me, make the voices go quiet.

Please, big sister, Make all the pain and hurt of the words go away.

Please, I beg of you. Stay.

-chris/bee

Answer 4

Its nice

Answer 5

Thank you I'll be submitting it :]

Answer 6

hope u get 100

Answer 7

Awe, ty! <3

Answer 8

np

Answer 9

I like it, good job.

Answer 10

ahh its so good i love it, good job

Answer 11

Thank you so much for your kind words <3 I got a 98% :]

Answer 12

That’s great

Answer 13

So relatable. Great way u wrote the stanzas. Also u have a grammatically incorrect word, you put tare, it should be tear.

Answer 14

That must be why I got 98%, than you for the correction! I now know :]