Poem.

I felt alone like people had taken and taken and left me with nothing at all.

They were so far, not a single message, or a letter, or a simple call.

Blood and tears lay upon my body as I realized what I had done, alone I was once again, No one around but one.

You.

How was someone, that barely spoke taking over my mind whole? Healing my scars and extracting the great amount of woe?

You finally called, finally someone did. They acted as if calling or acknowledging I existed was something I had forbid.

You spoke and your voice had a great amount of sorrow, but I'd known your wise words had led me to seek a better future, a better tomorrow.

The cards they had laid out for me were nothing but beautiful white lies and broken promises, that'll never show themselves or never be seen through and through.

But a part of me wanted to believe- who actually did believe, was nothing but a fool.

The words they spoke, sounded so sweet. Like maybe they did- actually- somewhat care about me.

But like always, it wasn't true.

Leaving me more hurt than ever, truly feeling blue.

But when you had shown yourself in front of me I realized I only needed you.

You showed me things I had never knew, you taught me how to be myself, and how not everything our siblings swore and promised was true.

You may not have been here my whole life, but you're still the big brother I had grown attached to.

You were a sort of hero, a teacher, the God above.

You were my older brother who I had grown to love.

brother, you're the reason for my survival, the reason why I am a better person, the reason I see things through, cause without you my future would be nothing, it wouldn't have a purpose.

You are the reason I reach for the oh, so sweet glory to fight through life.

You're the savior in my story. Just another reason, why I am alive.

I love you big brother, I can promise you, it's not a lie.

-chris/bee

Question

Poem.

I felt alone like people had taken and taken and left me with nothing at all.

They were so far, not a single message, or a letter, or a simple call.

Blood and tears lay upon my body as I realized what I had done, alone I was once again, No one around but one.

You.

How was someone, that barely spoke taking over my mind whole? Healing my scars and extracting the great amount of woe?

You finally called, finally someone did. They acted as if calling or acknowledging I existed was something I had forbid.

You spoke and your voice had a great amount of sorrow, but I'd known your wise words had led me to seek a better future, a better tomorrow.

The cards they had laid out for me were nothing but beautiful white lies and broken promises, that'll never show themselves or never be seen through and through.

But a part of me wanted to believe- who actually did believe,  was nothing but a fool.

The words they spoke, sounded so sweet. Like maybe they did- actually- somewhat care about me.

But like always, it wasn't true.

Leaving me more hurt than ever, truly feeling blue.

But when you had shown yourself in front of me I realized I only needed you.

You showed me things I had never knew, you taught me how to be myself, and how not everything our siblings swore and promised was true.

You may not have been here my whole life, but you're still the big brother I had grown attached to.

You were a sort of hero, a teacher, the God above.

You were my older brother who I had grown to love.

brother, you're the reason for my survival, the reason why I am a better person, the reason I see things through, cause without you my future would be nothing, it wouldn't have a purpose.

You are the reason I reach for the oh, so sweet glory to fight through life.

You're the savior in my story. Just another reason, why I am alive.

I love you big brother, I can promise you, it's not a lie.

-chris/bee

Fortish · Answer

Love it!

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

I love it.

1008426 · Answer

its really good

ChrisGarcia16 · Answer

Thank you for your kind words <3 :]

QuestionCoveBot · Answer

Your welcome

Fortish · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

Thank you for your kind words <3 :]

Please release more for your fans, and ofc my friend!

Fortish · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

I have had other poems other than this one, but it was for my sister and a heartbreak. I closed the post already though.

I think i seen the heartbreak one.

Fortish · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

Yea, it was describing a feeling

@fortish wrote:

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

I have had other poems other than this one, but it was for my sister and a heartbreak. I closed the post already though.

I think i seen the heartbreak one.

Oh hope you feel better now

Fortish · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

@fortish wrote:

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

Yea, it was describing a feeling

@fortish wrote:

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

I have had other poems other than this one, but it was for my sister and a heartbreak. I closed the post already though.

I think i seen the heartbreak one.

Oh hope you feel better now

I am all good, have no worries! <3 :]

Oki