CrazyHotGhost:
Abuse of a Heart by CHG Abuse of a heart Darkest of night Clouded over Breaking soul Swears he loves me Thinking he's lying Nothing fake nor real Lying in the bush Bleeding out Death of a heart A butterfly frozen over Cruelness of a world You're rejected from. This is my first and last attempt at public, non-anonymous poetry.
XxKatsukiBakuhoexX:
Amazing job togie 👏
CrazyHotGhost:
Djpup:
HEART BEEN BROKE SO MANY TIMES I I DONT KNOW WHAT TO BELIEVE
Djpup:
btw i love everything u do because im ur number one fan <3
XxKatsukiBakuhoexX:
Jd no
Djpup:
JD YES
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XxKatsukiBakuhoexX:
take that to dms
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xxemilianaxx:
That's pretty good
CrazyHotGhost:
Shadow:
Nice poem. It reminds me of poetry night poetry, I forget what it's called. But it doesn't really need a cadence because it's more about the emotion and effect of it being said. The emotions rolling together in a way is the rhythm of the poem. Great stuff.
OLIVER69:
I like it. Its really good, I hope you make more poems. < 3
Marlin24k:
Slay, love it!
LillPerson:
Good Job!
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KyledaGreat:
Thank you for sharing your poem "Abuse of a Heart" with us. The poem conveys a sense of emotional pain and turmoil, exploring the experience of being trapped in a relationship that is abusive and emotionally damaging. The repetition of the phrase "abuse of a heart" emphasizes the sense of emotional pain and vulnerability that the narrator is experiencing, while the imagery of the "darkest of night" and the "clouded over" mind suggests a sense of confusion and disorientation. The line "swears he loves me, thinking he's lying" conveys a sense of emotional manipulation and the difficulty of trusting someone who is abusive. The imagery of "lying in the bush, bleeding out" suggests a sense of physical danger and the potential for harm. The final lines of the poem suggest a sense of hopelessness and isolation, with the butterfly frozen over and the sense of rejection from the larger world. Overall, the poem conveys a powerful sense of emotional pain and the difficulty of escaping from an abusive relationship. The use of vivid imagery and repetition helps to create a sense of emotional intensity and emphasizes the importance of seeking help and support in times of need. Thank you for sharing your poem with me.
LillPerson:
Good Job!
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Arieonna:
i love that so much
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