Question

I wrote this some time ago, idk of it'd be considered a song or something I wrote. But tell me your thoughts on it please!?

Answer 1

You make me feel aliiveee-
You make me feel aliiiivee-
You make me feel aliivvee-

Was lonely on here from the start,
no love, no care, didn't feel fair..
Met ma new bsf felt like she actually cared. One day suddenly she told me half randomly that i should follow you. Fanned you and texted, forgot who texted first tho. Well it's alright honestly cuz either way I'll never forget that day. Started talking more and more, with you a smile I always wore. You were everything I dreamed of, my best friend, loving and caring, gentle and soft and everything else sweet. Never gonna forget Valentine's Day, because that's when you made my day a beautiful memory. Asked me to be your Valentine, was shocked and in disbelief that you would even ask someone like me. If I'm right not even a day or few later, couldn't take it anymore and had to ask n tell you. I like you, there anyway you might like me too? Was hella shy and nervous and asked you out, to get it out the way. But wasn't prepared for what you'd say. For some reason you said yes and I immediately felt blessed. I recommended we date for a week lowkey just to see if there was really anyway you could fr love me. Dated for a week n for me was paradise, felt pleased and happy realizing maybe it was meant to be. Talked it out n asked nervously if you'd still wanna be a you and me- or go back how we used to be. Anxiously waiting staring at my screen, nervously wondering. You said you still wanted me, made me feel so happy. Throughout the good, the bad and the ugly you never once parted from me. You made me feel that I wasn't a mistake or problem. That on the contrary I was beautiful somehow, yes indeed. Taught me how to open my heart and trust, what we had wasn't just lust. All the times I was sad and cried all you'd do is tell me how much you loved me and all the meaningful why's behind it. You saved me soo many times endlessly, and kept reminding me how much I meant to you. Without you I don't know what'd I do. No matter what happens between you and me, in my heart you'll always be. Just wanna say thanks for loving me-

Answer 2

nice

Answer 3

its really lovely (:

Answer 4

That is really amazing sister. I hope you are doing better!

Answer 5

Sorry for jus seeing this. You made me so happy, thats why i didnt wanna end the relationship. You taught me to love again and be pure. Everything that i had for u was real. I dont regret ever asking u to be my valentine, i love you luna

Answer 6

This is so sweet and beautiful <3 awesome story

Answer 7

Interesting

Answer 8

Not you the poemish somgish

Answer 9

Well i know that i'm not interesting lol

Answer 10

I love it