I would like some feedback on the story im writing !

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AddyM · Answer

He wolke back up in the field but something was different the house and the strange man were gone and the only thing left was a little stuffed frog sitting where the house was, “what a strange little thing”, draugr said he picked it up and saw that it only had one eye just like the frog charos had given to him only it was a stuffed animal thinking it must have all been a dream draugr started to head back home only to realize he did know which way was home he wandered around for hours only to find endless forest he only stoped searching for an exit when he heard crying. He realized that the crying was coming from the clearing where he met charos. Dragur rushed back to the clearing to see his boyfriend and shouted,“hey! I are you ok? im over here!” after a moment he realized that his boyfriend was crying over his body,  he had a sudden and horrific realization he was dead. Draugr rushed over to his boyfriend and to his body to see that

AddyM · Answer

*there is %1000 grammar mistakes i know *

AddyM · Answer

this is my story called the ghost and im rewriting it for the 100th time

sclay055 · Answer

Nice Nice Love it :D

curlyheadbella · Answer

Its really good lmk when you finish it cuz now im interested

AddyM · Answer

@sclay055 wrote:

Nice Nice Love it :D

Thank you !

AddyM · Answer

@curlyheadbella wrote:

Its really good lmk when you finish it cuz now im interested

Will do but im not sure when im ever going to finish it ive been writing this thing since last years

AddyM · Answer

not me completley remixing my story

curlyheadbella · Answer

@addym wrote:

@curlyheadbella wrote:

Its really good lmk when you finish it cuz now im interested

Will do but im not sure when im ever going to finish it ive been writing this thing since last years

lol ok i understand that bc when i write my book i literally only write when i get ideas

Chop · Answer

makes me feel good in the turkey leg while i choke the bird

xXmattXx · Answer

Some mistakes like you said yeah, but overall it's great, keep it up!

xXmattXx · Answer

@chop wrote:

makes me feel good in the turkey leg while i choke the bird

Wdhhh😭

curlyheadbella · Answer

@chop wrote:

makes me feel good in the turkey leg while i choke the bird

..... what

karissafrazier · Answer

i like it

Olive2006 · Answer

Yea other than a few word choice mistake and grammar choices, its good.

Babygurl85 · Answer

It is great besides the few mistakes. Fix those and you will be on point.

AddyM · Answer

@chop wrote:

makes me feel good in the turkey leg while i choke the bird

what ?

Chop · Answer

its a meme

daddywolfhotstuff · Answer

hi izzy

100k · Answer

@daddywolfhotstuff wrote:

hi izzy

hi lol

100k · Answer

its good, i like it

daddywolfhotstuff · Answer

same

100k · Answer

@daddywolfhotstuff wrote:

same

reply to my dm

daddywolfhotstuff · Answer

why o.o

100k · Answer

@daddywolfhotstuff wrote:

why o.o

nvm- ima go

daddywolfhotstuff · Answer

okay good bye

kaleighh533 · Answer

although youve made a few writing mistakes its common for people who are writing a new novel set aside all the spelling errors and so far its amazing keep up the good work !