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Bella2493202:

Read this pls and im most likely not gonna finish it but it seems like its gonna be a good book. Like all good romance novels and movies, this story is tragic. But this isn't any Romeo and Juliet. This isn't Cinderella or Beauty and the Beast. All those stories did was create false representations of reality for little girls, making them want to be a princess, making them believe in true love’s kiss. Making them live in a fantasy land and believing that everything is sunshine and rainbows. That's not what life is about. But this story isn't any fantasy. This story isn't about sunshine and rainbows. Oh no, this story is real life. It all started when.....

SarahCookie17:

Ooooh I'm hooked

Bella2493202:

@sarahcookie17 wrote:
Ooooh I'm hooked
Lol thx

hiphopismylife:

thats is really good

Bella2493202:

@hiphopismylife wrote:
thats is really good
thc

BarbieJoo:

That sounds really cool! I'm looking forward to reading more part's already.

Sharkattack123:

Nice! good job, keep it up!

Astrid1:

I like it!!!

Jassy1117:

It's a great start, would love to read more!

Bella2493202:

thx everybody

Cheythepie56:

I would defenitly love to read more I wish I could write a story like that

uhkward:

yeah yep you got a medal there

Bella2493202:

@uhkward wrote:
yeah yep you got a medal there
lol thx

Bbxblue23:

i need more bruhhhh

madz2345:

GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!! ITS SOOOOOO GOOOD

bbftyftydghvc:

i love it

Bella2493202:

lol thx guys... glad smb appreciates me

imyurdad009:

I woke up finally from my sleep, and I see all my family's worried faces. I look around and I see that I'm in the hospital and I'm confused for a moment before things come back to me I tried to end it. i just stare at my parents with udder embarrassment what was going through their heads i fail at everything I do even dying I close my eyes and rolled over to my side I couldn't be here no I couldn't do this at all the sad looks the sudden caring out of nowhere ....... what do you think of my story i just started it what is your guys's opinions

Bella2493202:

@imyurdad009 wrote:
I woke up finally from my sleep, and I see all my family's worried faces. I look around and I see that I'm in the hospital and I'm confused for a moment before things come back to me I tried to end it. i just stare at my parents with udder embarrassment what was going through their heads i fail at everything I do even dying I close my eyes and rolled over to my side I couldn't be here no I couldn't do this at all the sad looks the sudden caring out of nowhere ....... what do you think of my story i just started it what is your guys's opinions
Bro omg.... finish it right now i mean its a lot of grammatical errors but its so good

loverkasy:

ouu, lovely job

bbftyftydghvc:

good job

taylahodo:

it's amazing i wish i wrote that🥰🤩

MaxTon:

nice

baconway:

very gooddd, you should make more like this

cadenhackman:

wow

toga:

I love it if I when to the bookstore and see it I will buy it in a heart bet

Tyrun:

Wow cool

OLIVER69:

noice :]

Flowerpower5290:

Love itt!!

imyurdad009:

@bella2493202 wrote:
@imyurdad009 wrote:
I woke up finally from my sleep, and I see all my family's worried faces. I look around and I see that I'm in the hospital and I'm confused for a moment before things come back to me I tried to end it. i just stare at my parents with udder embarrassment what was going through their heads i fail at everything I do even dying I close my eyes and rolled over to my side I couldn't be here no I couldn't do this at all the sad looks the sudden caring out of nowhere ....... what do you think of my story i just started it what is your guys's opinions
Bro omg.... finish it right now i mean its a lot of grammatical errors but its so good
I woke up with a bright light in my eyes making me close them instantly I opened them back up squinting when I heard my name, my mom. "Jen" I opened them all the way and turned to the side of the bed "Mom," I said confused what happened why was I here why was she here? her face was red and she had tears all over her face mixed with sweat I looked beside her and saw my dad who was looking at the floor motionless "Dad" he didn't move just ignored me that stung but I looked down at the bed and it came back to me I tried to end it.. it- it didn't work I instantly feel like I'm about to throw up and there are tears already down my face before I can stop them I can't do this, no I can't deal with this I turn to my side away from my parents and close my eyes.... I can't no why do I screw up everything I can't do anything right even die I couldn't deal with my parent's confusion and hurt that I had tried to leave them. " jesabelle" my mom said behind me my mom never calls me that unless it's serious "please just.... just tell me why you-" she didn't finish she broke down in tears on the floor I felt horrible and turned back towards her my heart broken " mom please it's not your fault " she ignored me and shook her head" yes it's all my fault " remixed it a little

carry:

Sounds amazing!

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