Question

one of the songs i wrote.. tell me what u think

How many times do I have to say it
You're the only thing that I have
I spend so many nights alone
I really need you back
I gave you every part of me
There is no turning back
Now I wanna die
I can't wait to see it; black

I'm locked inside a prison
Happiness is vivid
Why did you get distant?
Why is It I'm still living?
Can't say what I am feeling
I guess I'm cold I'm chilling
You said that you love me
I guess that you were kidding

I lost a lot of people
But losing you hurt the most
I told you my life is pointless
Remember I'm just a ghost
I say it when I'm recording
Only you could give me hope
But now that you're gone
I might as well grab the rope

I wish it stayed the same
Why is love so fake
You took away my happiness
So I just grab the blade
I'm wrapped inside your chains
Only you could keep me sane
You stole every part of me
Then you ran away

(BREAK)

Of course I'm out of reach
I'm lost you made me bleed
My heart is frozen blue
Why is life so bleak
I see you in my dreams
We're both happy so it seems
And then I wake up
And you're never here with me

I'm frozen, lost, and im hurting inside
When it comes to love, I am so blind
How could you leave me, you were my light
I guess that you were never really mine
You say you love me then say nevermind
You hurt you me once and you hurt me twice
I gave you every part of me, so I guess I have to pay the price

How come nobody loves me?
Do people think I am ugly?
I do what I can to be funny
But it's hard when nobody wants me
Love is the only thing I'm wanting
Maybe I should stop being loving
Most days I feel like Im nothing
I just need someone to hold me

I'm living all on my own
Everyday I do nothing but suffer
I'm downing all these pills
I keep thinking of you with another
It's killing me inside
To know that you're not my lover
How was I so blind?
Love is just undiscovered

Answer 1

Omg. I felt every single word! It’s powerful and so so relatable it’s INSANE!!🤯 keep up the great work!

Answer 2

Damn i felt that, I honestly love this. You should sing it or someone else could sing it and give you credit, I love thissss W

Answer 3

Damn sis it’s the best thing I’ve ever heard/read I love it keep ur head up high