-Describe a feeling-

~Lovesick Letter~

(This isn't real it's just a work of writing!)

I love you.

I say it just like that, I love you so much that I clench my shirt from my chest by how fast my heart patters against it.
I feel myself wanting, no... needing your attention on me, and me only 24/7. I love the feeling of your warm hands entrapping mine. The sparks I can feel and almost physically see when you hold my hand. The way your voice sounds when speaking to me, it's so soft and delicate, and so very addicting. My name drips from your lips like honey enriched in sweet milk, so sweet and subtle, drowning me in its rather addicting substance.

I love the feeling I get when I am around you. If you ever felt the feeling deep in your core and it makes you feel on edge but in a good way, like anticipating what's to come or what will be happening in moments. When you can't sleep because that is all on your mind during the night. That is what I feel but make it every day. I can go home just to spend hours on a call with you. The next day we are holding hands once again...
But we never speak of why we do such romantic things. We can cuddle on the couch and watch countless movies and just bathe in each other's presence. You can place soft kisses on my forehead and cheeks, I can see you slightly glance at my lips as if you are trying to see if you can go a step further into the unknown territory. I cannot blame you because I feel the same way. I always catch myself glancing at your lips wishing to feel the warmth and love in a form of a shared kiss, I would melt right on the spot.

I want you to just hold me and call me yours. Stop saying we are just friends, stop calling me your best friend.
Yes, I absolutely adore that title of being your, "best friend." But I want to be yours as well. I want the title of being yours.
Cause, when I see my future, you are my main component. I know you feel your heart speed up when I am around, I see the blush become apparent, and I know you see mine as well.
I may sound selfish, but can you blame me?

You make this life so much more, colorful. Before you, everything was bland, gray, and dull.
But you made my world explode with beautiful colors and I want to forever live in the moment with you.

(Constructive Criticism is welcome!)

much love, chris/bee

Question

-Describe a feeling-

~Lovesick Letter~

(This isn't real it's just a work of writing!)

I love you.

I say it just like that, I love you so much that  I clench my shirt from my chest by how fast my heart patters against it. 
I feel myself wanting, no... needing your attention on me, and me only 24/7. I love the feeling of your warm hands entrapping mine. The sparks I can feel and almost physically see when you hold my hand. The way your voice sounds when speaking to me, it's so soft and delicate, and so very addicting. My name drips from your lips like honey enriched in sweet milk, so sweet and subtle, drowning me in its rather addicting substance.

I love the feeling I get when I am around you. If you ever felt the feeling deep in your core and it makes you feel on edge but in a good way, like anticipating what's to come or what will be happening in moments. When you can't sleep because that is all on your mind during the night. That is what I feel but make it every day. I can go home just to spend hours on a call with you. The next day we are holding hands once again...
But we never speak of why we do such romantic things. We can cuddle on the couch and watch countless movies and just bathe in each other's presence. You can place soft kisses on my forehead and cheeks, I can see you slightly glance at my lips as if you are trying to see if you can go a step further into the unknown territory. I cannot blame you because I feel the same way. I always catch myself glancing at your lips wishing to feel the warmth and love in a form of a shared kiss, I would melt right on the spot.

I want you to just hold me and call me yours. Stop saying we are just friends, stop calling me your best friend.
Yes, I absolutely adore that title of being your, "best friend." But I want to be yours as well. I want the title of being yours. 
Cause, when I see my future, you are my main component. I know you feel your heart speed up when I am around, I see the blush become apparent, and I know you see mine as well. 
I may sound selfish, but can you blame me?

You make this life so much more, colorful. Before you, everything was bland, gray, and dull. 
But you made my world explode with beautiful colors and I want to forever live in the moment with you.

(Constructive Criticism is welcome!)

much love, chris/bee

Evachocolate · Answer

WOW!

Evachocolate · Answer

i like it

ChrisGarcia16 · Answer

@evachocolate wrote:

WOW!

@evachocolate wrote:

i like it

Thank you :] Trying to get back into writing- -Chris/bee

Evachocolate · Answer

@chrisgarcia16 wrote:

@evachocolate wrote:

WOW!

@evachocolate wrote:

i like it

Thank you :] Trying to get back into writing- -Chris/bee

Np

Alexis1415 · Answer

This is very good and well put, good job!!! I hope to see more from you in the future.

ChrisGarcia16 · Answer

@alexis1415 wrote:

This is very good and well put, good job!!! I hope to see more from you in the future.

Thank you for your kind words <3 much love, chris/bee

Sharkattack123 · Answer

Gg

AngelaSanchez18 · Answer

Its amazing and creative