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Yuk1:

update on my horror story :)

Yuk1:

Murder House By: charlie Chapter one: Flash backs Walking into the kitchen to see a woman covered in bright pink blood being dragged into the basement by papa. I’m confused as to why is papa is dragging ms.Yako into the basement. Should I ask him? Or will he get mad and hurt me again? papa? I spoke in my small voice. He looked up at his eldest daughter, but instead of getting mad he… smiled? papa: now now my dear yukinara there is nothing to worry about. I was happy. I was always happy when papa wasn’t angry. I smiled back but then he spoke again. Papa: But if you tell anyone I will kill you… do you understand? The color drained from my face when I heard that, papa was going to kill me if i told anyone? Suddenly I jolted up, it was only a dream. god why doesn’t that memory ever leave me? It’s been eleven years since my father murdered ms.Yako and i became his servant. Helping my father with dirty work, dismembering the bodies of the people that he had killed. It used to make me feel sick seeing the bodies but now… I'm not fazed by the dead bodies anymore. I turned to my nightstand and put my golden colored glasses on. I walked into my bathroom and changed out of my hoodie and put my school uniform on. I didn’t like the skirt. It made me feel like someone I'm not but I can't change it. Father would hurt me again. I walked out of my bathroom into my kitchen to see my twin sister mizumi and my younger brother Ren talking Ren: i just want to know what happened to her mizu Mizumi: I understand Ren but I really don’t know. You should ask Yuki when he gets here. I didn’t really hear the conversation as I had just walked in the kitchen. When Mizumi saw me she smiled. I waved good morning Mizumi: Morning Nara! Yukinara: Morning Mizu Ren; morning Yuki. hey uh i have a question Yukinara: Hmm? Yes Ren? Ren: Do you know what happened to Miss Yako? The question startled me. Why the night right after the dream? Why? Why? I stood there frozen for a moment wondering what to say. Do I tell them or not? If i do father will murder me. The thoughts running through my head gave me a bit of a headache. I stummered a answer. Yukinara: n-no i don’t Ren. Ren: oh… thanks anyways Yuki Yukinara: no problem I put on a weak smile. I'm glad he bought the lie. The flashes of that night kept flashing in my head. Then it stopped so suddenly it startled me a bit. I noticed that I hadn't gotten the younger kids up yet. I went upstairs to see that only Azumi and Kiyo were up. Sora and Aito were still asleep. I went into Sora's room first, and it turns out he wasn’t asleep, he was just sitting on his bed. when he saw me he jumped into my arms. Sora was always clingy towards me even at the age of twelve. I hugged Sora back as he snuggled into me. I put down and he started laughing, something he usually did after I picked him up. No matter how old Sora got he was always a bit childish and clingy to me. Yukinara: alright sora you have to get ready for school Sora: aww can i come with you today big brother? Yukinara: sorry buddy but highschool is a bit too much for you Sora: but i’m in middle school now Sora was always stubborn. He told me he wanted to be with me forever but I knew that would change one day, he wouldn’t want to stay with his big brother his entire life. I left his room to go get aito, he was there laying with the stuffed bunny in his arm. People would bully him for sleeping with a stuffed animal at the age of nine but I always reassured him that it was okay. I sat down on his bed right next to where he was asleep and started to pet his hair. His small green eyes slowly opened as he awoke from his sleep. A smile formed across his face, he sat up and hugged me. I wrapped my arms around him. Aito let go looking at me, I looked back at him. He seemed to understand what I was trying to get him to do, so he sprang up and walked into his closet getting his school clothes. Getting up and walking out of his room I noticed my father standing at the end of the hallway. I tried not looking at him but his presence was a bit nerve wracking. As I walked past him he grabbed my wrist. I looked up at his dark black eye, he was a scary individual. Father: my dear yukinara how about you come do some work before school, hmm? I knew what he meant by work when he said that, he wanted me to go dismember the bodies of the people he had just killed. Yuki: Sorry father but I can't get my uniform messy, it would be a shame if someone found out about this, now wouldn’t it? I played into my father’s little game pretended like what he does isn’t disgusting. My father nodded and let go of my wrist. As I started to walk away I could still feel his eyes on me. Once I got back downstairs I called everyone to get their shoes on since it was time to go. Feet running from the kitchen, living room and stairs were heard as all six kids ran to put their shoes on for school. No matter how old they get, I will always feel like their parents since I practically raised them. Father was only home four days a week, Friday, Saturday, Sunday, and monday. Walking out the door, the older kids walked one way and the younger kids walked the other way. Once we got to school I saw two girls, one with pale white skin and dark purple hair with black highlights, the other with dark skin and lighter purple hair the same shade as mine. Their names were ash and hikari. I walked up to the two of them, they seemed to be talking about something. Yuki: morning Ash and Hikari, How are you this morning Ash: Ah good morning Yuki, i am well Hikari: You both don’t show that much emotion do you? I mean come on you two talking alone must be soo boring! Hikari was always very adamant about having fun so she would complain about me and not show that much emotion. I’m not sure why Ash didn’t show that much emotion but she’s always been that way so I won't question it. Ash: Now now darling no need to be rude this early in the morning Hikari: I- I’m not Ash! God why do you have to use that nickname in public? It's embarrassing. Ash: It’s simply a way to make sure you don’t cause havoc Yuki: Heh I chuckled at Ash's comment that hikari and a few others in the group liked to cause chaos for the fun of it. I'm not sure why though I personally have never seen the appeal to causing chaos for no reason. Me and Ash were alway the voice of reason even if I'm busy a lot of the time. The three of us talked for a little bit while we waited for everyone else in the group to school. I jumped as i felt a pair of arms wrapped around my waist, once i heard hikari snickering at me i knew who it was. Turning around to see a good friend of mine named oli. his blue and orange hair normally covered his dark green eyes, but from this angle i could see them. Oli looked down at me and smiled. Oli: Awe look how cute you are wrapped in my arms yuki-chan Yuki: Mhm okay Oli Oli: But your so tiny it’s cute Yuki: Oli- I understand that I'm 4’9 but please let me go. He laughed at my words and let me go. Taking a second to breath i hear the bell ring. The school was quite big so it took me a minute to get to class. I walked into class and sat next to my best friend lia she was always full of energy even at 8:00 in the morning. Lia was always very pretty almost like a goddess Time skip to after school. Oli and I were standing outside the school talking to each other as usual. Oli: Hey Yuki, I heard there is a new ice cream shop that opened up. So you wanna go with me in a few? Yuki: Oliver, have you forgotten? I can’t hang out during the week.. Oli: Oh right, sorry yuki maybe this weekend? Yuki: Uh yeah maybe Oli: Okay! Well if you can go i’ll pick you up and 7:00pm, on saturday I softly smiled at his enthusiastic words. Oli’s personality was always a joy to be around. I saw Ren and Mizumi walk out of the school talking to one another. I wrapped my arms around his waist and told him goodbye and started walking over to my two siblings. While walking home I would put my headphones in and listen to the songs I had been working on. It was always a calm walk, the woods that surrounded my house were always very pretty and had a good amount of cute little animals. As we walked into the house I saw Sora standing right at the edge of the stairs, he was already changed out of his school uniform. Sora: Big brother, your home! Yuki: hello Sora glad to see your home safe Sora: I'm too big brother, but can we go out and play now? Yuki: After i get changed out of my uniform Sora: Yay! Mizumi: Awe nara i’m sensing some favoritism~ Yuki: I- what? No i don’t have favorites among my siblings i’m just being a good older brother. Mizumi: Hm whatever you say Nara I looked at Mizumi unamused with her antics even if they were usual. It didn’t take me long to get changed out of my uniform and into some jeans and a black hoodie I saved for the winter since I hate the cold. Once I was outside in the garden I saw Kiyo attending to her plants in the green house and Sora sitting on the bench waiting for me. His bright red eyes alway lit up when they met with my pastel blue eyes. The way Sora always looked up to me made me happy but it also hurt because of all the secrets I have to keep from him. Sora picked up something from the table, while i looked at him confused he walked up to me and smile Sora: Okay okay sooo i want you and me to draw together! Yuki: Sora, I can't draw. Sora: Awe of course you can you just have to put your mind to it Yuki: Um okay fine i’ll draw with you Sora. I sat down at the table right next to him while he started to sketch on the piece of paper. I took a look at his paper and realized that he was drawing some type of flower. I'm guessing a lily of some sort, either way it was such a gorgeous drawing. My mind started to space out once the pencil made contact with the paper, all that I could think about was how I was going to tell my siblings about Miss Yako. maybe i don’t have to tell them about father murdering her, maybe it could just be a secret that only father and i know of. I don’t know how long passed before i was snapped back into reality by sora’s laughter, i looked up at sora then back down at my paper and realized i scribbled all over it Yuki: Oh. My apologizes Sora i didn’t mean to waste your paper Sora: Don’t worry about it Yuki, if you angle it the right way you can make art out of anything! I pulled my little brother into a tight hug, something he absolutely loved, though the moment was shortened when we heard someone clearing their throat to catch our attention. Father was standing there right at the railing of the gazebo we had in the garden. I stood up and walked over to him, seeing what he wanted from me. Father: Heh oh Yukinara. I need to go cook dinner then well you know the rest. His laugh made me sick. How could he be so sadistic? But i couldn’t deny him so i walked into the house and then walked into the kitchen to help my twin sister. I saw the meat on the counter and immediately felt nauseous. It wasn’t a rare occurrence for father to feed his kids the meat of his victims. Everyone blindlessly ate the meat while I sat there feeling sick to my stomach. They questioned why I didn't eat the meat our father gave us but over time they stopped. Mizumi looked pleased to see me, her smile not fading from her face as she walked to the pantry. Mizumi: Ah Yuki good of you to join me Yuki: Mizumi. Your acting like this is some sort of mafia meeting. Mizumi: What? Oh Yuki, your sense of humor is so funny! Anyways~ i need you to take over with dinner Yuki: Wait, what? Mizumi: Yup, because I need to make a dessert of some kind. What do you think? Cake? Cupcakes? Brown- Yuki: Mizumi, I don’t know if I can handle dinner all by myself. Mizumi: Aw you got it i mean you have done it before, haven’t you? Yuki: *sigh* fine i guess you're right Mizumi. Mizumi: Yay! Thank you Yuki To be honest I wanted to tell her the reason why it was so hard for me to cook meat that i knew was from humans, but i had to stomach it just so she wouldn’t get suspicious. As i was roaming the kitchen grabbing all the thing i needed for dinner, ren walked into the kitchen with his usual moody face Ren: Hey Yuki hey mizumi Mizumi: Hi Ren! Yuki: Afternoon Ren. Ren: Um Yuki you look a bit sick, do you want me to take over? Yuki: No no i’m good ren Ren: Are you sure? You look really pale Yuki: Yes Ren i’m fine don’t worry about it Ren: Okay well come get me if you need anything I nodded, Ren was always that type of person to look scary but is actually one of the nicest people when it comes to his family. It took me about an hour to finish dinner. Though i still felt sick, so i decided to go hang out in the greenhouse for a little bit to clear my mind. The flowers in the greenhouse were always so lovely to be around, and the smell was always very pleasant. My favorite flower has always been calla lilies, they were always so beautiful to me. Breathing in the fresh air, clearing my mind makes all the thoughts go away. The footsteps coming from the side the door is on, I open my eyes to see a certain pink haired little girl named kiyo. She had a watering can in her hands, and I waved at her with a smile on my face. Yuki: Hey Yuki i didn’t know you would be in here Yuki: Hello Kiyo, are you watering your plants? Kiyo: Oh you couldn’t tell? Yuki: Heh you and your sarcasm kiyo Kiyo: Yes yes, now I need to water my plants. When it started getting colder when autumn came, we had to move a lot of the plants from the garden to the greenhouse. Sadly not all of them could make it, though we got all the ones that could fit and still make it a comfortable place. As I stood up and started to walk out of the greenhouse, my sleeve caught on a rose thorn. I tried to pull on my sleeve but it only ripped it. Once I saw the rip I sighed and walked inside to see azumi so he could fix my sleeve. Once I got to azumi’s room he was sewing a piece of clothing. Azumi: O-oh hey yuki, do you need something?. Yuki: Uh yeah i do, the sleeve on my hoodie ripped in the greenhouse and i was wondering if you could fix it?. Azumi: Oh yeah of course i can fix it for you yuki. I took my hoodie off since I had a long sleeved shirt under my hoodie. I tossed it onto the table then me and azumi walked down stairs for dinner. As I sat down at the table, I saw the meat that was so perfectly disguised for eating.I had already made myself some cheese tacos and set them aside. I won’t lie that I have some skill when it comes to cooking but I'm definitely not the best. Father: Hmm yukinara how come you are eating any of the chicken tacos you made? Yuki: Father. It's because I don't like the taste, nor texture of meat in general. Why would he ask me that? He knows the reason. It was sickening that he was playing this dumb. I tried to eat quickly so i didn’t have to be around him any longer. As I started to go up the stairs I felt a hand firmly grab my wrist, I looked at his cold black eyes and creepy grin. Father: Now now yukinara you know you have work to do Yuki: i- i guess i do father… I sighed as I started to walk into the basement. The smell was so vulgar that it made me feel nauseous. I stepped towards the rotting bodies sprawled across the floor and bloodied. As the saw made contact with one of the bodies arms, i grabbed the arm as to not move it and accidentally cut myself in the process. It took around two hours to dismember and put the bodies in bags. I couldn’t stand being down in the basement anymore with that horrible smell. Once I got to my room I decided to take a shower to get the blood off of my arms and legs. It got colder as the blood soaked clothes came off my body, the wet sound the clothes made as they hit the floor made me gag in disgust. I took a step into the shower the feeling of the hot water hitting my back made me happy since all of my troubles were done for the day. I shut the water off and put on a pair of shorts and a t-shirt. Laying in bed with my wet hair I thought of why father was making me do this? Or why did he feed his kids the meat of his victims?. I decided not to think about that and to just go to bed since it was already ten at night. Setting my glasses on the nightstand and getting under the covers, sighing in relief as I started to drift off to sleep. I don’t know how long I was asleep but I heard a small scream most likely coming from the basement. I didn't bother going downstairs to look, so I decided to check on it in the morning and go back to sleep for now. Chapter 2: untold secret I’m not sure how long I was asleep before I awoke. Today is Tuesday so father wasn’t home, which meant that it was my job to take care of my siblings even at the cost of my freedom. When i tell people i can’t hang out because i need to take care of my siblings some people ask “why i can’t let ren or mizumi watch them”. Father would get mad if I left them to hang out with friends so weekends are always a safe time for me. As I checked everyone's rooms, and saw that only Kiyo, Ren, and Mizumi were up. I assumed that they were just doing their own thing before school, but as I walked into the kitchen I saw Kiyo sitting on the stools by the island. There was something off about her, she was shaking as if she was scared. Yuki: Kiyo love, are you alright? The worry in my voice was transparent. Kiyo looked up at me with tears in her eyes, but she never responded to my question. The thoughts in my head started to wonder, did she find the bogs filled with the dead bodies in the basement?. If that did happen father would blame me, he’d kill me and replace me with kiyo if she did find out. I didn’t want her to end up like me and I would do anything to make sure that didn’t happen. Hugging her was a silent way for me to tell her that I was there for her and that I loved her. The two of us stayed like that for a while, once we separated I realized that it was time for us to leave for school. The walk to school was normal but I still couldn’t get the thought of Kiyo finding out about the secret between me and my father. As i got to school i saw someone i hadn’t seen in awhile, his name was kaashi Hirotashi, i’ve known him since i was four. Kaashi saw me and waved. As i walked up to him i gave him a hug Kaashi: morning yuki Yuki: good morning kaashi Kaashi: yuki. Yuki: yes? Kaashi: Has he hurt you again? Yuki: no other than a tight grab to my wrist Kaashi: Okay, good. Kaashi was the only person who caught on to my father’s suspicious activity, so now everytime he sees me, it’s actually to have someone that I can talk to about everything. I heard someone scoff behind me, as I turned around to see oli. Oli has this strange jealousy when i give kaashi any attention, though i found his jealousy really cute. Oli took me from Kaashi's arms and put his arms around my waist. Kaashi gave an irritating stare. The stare felt like daggers on my skin, but I knew it was meant for oli. Kaashi: What makes you think you have the right to grab someone without their permission? Oli: oh? I don’t think you have a say, I mean you aren’t his boyfriend after all. Kaashi: Neither are you oliver. Yuki: Could you both stop arguing? I’m not in the mood for this. I was getting quite annoyed with their bickering. Oli let me go as kaashi walked into the school. I sighed, today was going to be long. I walked into class and sat behind my twin sister Mizumi. Mizumi was always a bit odd. the only time she toll me to cook all of the dinner when meat was involved, it’s like she knew, yet instead of killing me she was torturing me. Mizumi: ya know yuki, Kiyo was really scared this morning. Yuki: Yeah, I know. I just wonder what got her so scared. Mizumi: eh probably your little secret Yuki: w-what secret? Mizumi: the secret between you and father yuki, come on don’t act stupid Once she said I froze, how could she know? I ended up noy paying attention in class to all the questions running through my mind. Lunch came around rather quickly as I hurried to find kaashii. He needed to know about this. Kaashi was standing by his locker grabbing something. Yuki: Kaashi we need to talk. Kaashi: hmm? What is yuki? Yuki: We can't talk about this here, it’s about him. Kaashi: okay My hand grabbed his wrist as we walked outside to the giant tree that we usually eat when we needed some quiet time. Yuki: kaashi. Mizumi knows, she knows about the murders, she knows about everything. Kaashi: But how did she find out? Yuki: I don't know but… I'm scared. I'm so scared of what’s going to happen now that she knows. Hell even kiyo might know Kaashi: wait… Does Kiyo know about this too? How the hell- Yuki: I'm not sure but this morning she was so scared, and Mizumi said it was about father and secret. We sat there talking about the situation until the bell rang. Kaashi helped me up, he walked me to my next class on the other side of the school. Yuki: thank you kaashi. Kaashi: no problem yuki, come to me when you have more information. Yuki: I will. I walked into class and sat down next to my friend kai. Kai was a very nice, yet sarcastic person. He was always there for me, I appreciated that. Liam, another one of my friends, sat next to kai. Liam: Hey kai! Hey yuki! Yuki: afternoon liam Kai: hey. Liam: You know Kai, you can show a bit more enthusiasm when talking to your boyfriend and best friend. Liam crossed his arms and huffed Kai: stop acting like that liam, or i’ll make you Yuki: hey pretty boy, stop flirting with liam Kai: w-wha- yuki what the hell! I snickered at him. It always messed kai up when i called him that, but i didn’t care it was funny. My last class didn’t seem too long. Kai explaining how to draw was pretty admirable. Once school was over i saw mizumi talking to a girl named keira, she was ash’s sister Mizumi: i guess i’ll see you later keira Keira: Do you have to go already? Mizumi: Yeah, me and my brothers always walk home together, sorry. Keira: oh okay, i guess i should go find ash then. Mizumi: Okay bye keira. As Mizumi walked over to me I felt an uneasy feeling in my stomach. Yuki: Hello mizumi. Mizumi: Hey yuki! Are you ready to walk home? Yuki: I actually need to help Kaashi with something, you and Ren can just walk home without me. Mizumi: oh? You really think you have a choice? Yuki: What are you talking about mizumi? Mizumi: oh it’s nothing, have fun with your little friend Mizumi turned and walked away, what the hell was she talking about? I decided not to think about it, and go find kaashi. Roaming the empty halls felt eerie, I found him in the music room. He was just sitting there on his phone. I walked into the room, my footsteps softly echoed through the room. Kaashi looked up at me, and gently smiled at me. Kaashi: yuki? You usually leave with mizumi and ren, why are you still here? Yuki: i- *sigh* i just wanted to tell you something kaashi. Kaashi: oh? Okay i’m listening Yuki: i just wanted to say that is anything happens to me, it’s my father he’s going to be the cause behind anything that happens to me Kaashi stood up and looked down at me, he gave me a grim look. Kaashi: what do you mean if anything happens to you? Yuki: *sigh* my father said if i told anyone he would kill me. Kaashi: but, you didn’t tell them Yuki: i know, but he won’t believe me Kaashi: yuki. it isn’t safe for you to stay there, you need to leave Yuki: I can't kaashi, he’ll just move on to one of the other kids. I’m stuck in a hole that I cannot get myself out of. Kaashi looked at me in complete shock. He knew most of the secret, but he didn’t know the full story. I hugged him, and walked home listening to music. On the walk home I stopped by the grocery store to pick up some things for dinner tonight. I decided to make omurice, it usually doesn’t have meat and everyone likes it. The rest of the walk was pretty cold, it was currently December 28th. It was still pretty early in winter but that didn’t mean it was anyless cold. When I stepped through the door I took my shoes off, and started walking to the kitchen to put the ingredients up. The house was quiet, which is unusual, but I didn't mind. Ren walked into the kitchen probably to see what the noises coming from the kitchen were. Ren: ah yuki your home. Do you want me to help you put the food up? Yuki: uh sure, thank you ren Ren: no problem, but why did you not walk home with me and mizumi? I didn’t want to tell him about me and kaashi’s conversation. Yuki: I had to go to the store, and I didn't hold you and mizu up. Ren: we wouldn- well i wouldn't have minded i’m not sure about mizumi though. Yuki: It's okay ren, how about I make us some hot chocolate? Ren: that would be nice yuki, i like hanging out with my favorite brother. After we had made the hot chocolate and some popcorn we went up to my room to watch a horror movie. We sat there for an hour criticizing the characters. It was silent for a few minutes, ren averted his eyes from the tv as he spoke Ren: why? Yuki: huh? Ren: why do you seem more happy when dad isn’t here? Even if you have to take care of all of us, why? Yuki: ren i- i can’t tell you. Ren’s eyes started to tear up, as he grabbed my shoulders slightly yet firmly Ren: is he forcing you not to tell me or, do you just not trust me? Siblings are supposed to trust each other, aren’t they? I looked at Ren in complete shock, what would make him think that I don't trust him? I’m doing this for his safety. Sitting there shocked as renhugged me, a movie playing in the background. Sora walked into the room, and me and Ren looked at him. Sora: hey yuki hey ren! Yuki: Hello Sora, did you need something? Sora: nuh uh, i just wanted to hang out with you two Yuki: well if that’s going to happen we need to change the movie, is that okay with you ren? Ren: yeah it was near the credits anyways Yuki: okay come here sora Sora climbed onto my bed, sitting in between me and ren. My eyes started to shut, feeling drowsy. Suddenly I felt someone shaking me. I opened my sleepy eyes to see Mizumi shaking me. Her smile was unnerving, like a killer about to kill its next victim. Mizumi: hello sleepyhead, how’d you sleep? Yuki: w-what’s going on? What time is it mizu? Mizumi: oh you know, like five in the afternoon I nodded, and got up to go make dinner. Kiyo was already down stairs, humming to herself. She seemed to getting water for her plant, the plants are her favorite thing.

Yuk1:

i only need a few more pages until chapter 2 is done, i'll update it when it's finished

Evachocolate:

I LOVE your book!

Evachocolate:

cant wait until its finished.

Yuk1:

awe thank you this book is going to have 4 chapters, so i'm almost halfway done

Evachocolate:

@yuk1 wrote:
awe thank you this book is going to have 4 chapters, so i'm almost halfway done
YAY!

Yuk1:

there will also be a second book

Yuk1:

it's going to be call "her obsession"

Evachocolate:

@yuk1 wrote:
there will also be a second book
YAY!!!

Evachocolate:

@yuk1 wrote:
it's going to be call "her obsession"
ok

Tyrun:

I like it

Tyrun:

Interesting very

AyooRello:

OMG SO OBESSEDDDDD

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