Question

my lil poem

Am I a monster I feel like one is it because i just hurt or upset people or try too hard to be there a friend that they don't need me there have i hurt anyone this bad that they just ghosted me blocked me or never spoke to me is it the fact that i don't care about anyone or is it cuz of my issues with my past i don’t want anyone to feel fear about me i wasn't to be there friend till the end

Answer 1

am i a monster i feel pain but i just dont show will anyone not be hurt by my thornes will they see i'm not heartless and just a caring person

Answer 2

rate this poem or give some feedback

Answer 3

Well its not exactly a poem. This sounds more of a vent.. there isn't a flow and hardly anything rhymes. Great job though :) keep writing and never give up 😃

Answer 4

I would recommend looking into all the different kinds and styles of stanzas.

Answer 5

i would recommend trying out different themes