Question

This is more of a song than a poem but yeah- also this was requested by an irl friend. If you have any song themes or poem themes, send me a message and I'll try my best. Anyways, tell me what you think. The theme was heartbreak but it was on the person who is to blame, not the one who it's about

I still can't get over the fact your gone.
I let you go thinking it would be better.
I miss you though.
I miss having that one person I can say anything to.
I miss telling someone I love them and meaning it romantically.
I miss being able to show affection.
I miss our cute conversations about getting married.
I miss being told "Congratulations on your engagement".
I miss laughing every time a notification came up on my screen saying your name.
I wish things were different.
But I can't get over my feelings for someone else.
I couldn't keep pretending that I didn't feel for them as I had felt about you.
I don't blame you, love. I blame myself.
But I still miss you.
I wish I could tell you I love you.
I wish I could say I'm sorry and you'd give me another chance.
You deserve better, though, so I'll let go.
I wish I could tell the person I love that I love them.
The thing is, I don't think they truly feel the same.
They've told me they love me, but I don't think they love me how I love them.
If you know who you are, speak to me about it.
If you don't, then I'm not going to ruin your life by confessing my feelings for you.
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I just want someone to call mi amor [my love]. I just want to call someone babe. I wish I hadn't let you go. But then, it's better for both of us. And hopefully I can move on, and get with the person whom I truly love.

Answer 1

It's really good.

Answer 2

Thats really nice :>

Answer 3

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Answer 4

Nice Job!