They really removed my book 🙄 I was getting kinda famous on here ngl
But anyways im writing a story and its for an assignment
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Carla lay on the warm grainy sand as the sun shines onto her face, highlighting her melanated skin. Drifting away thinking about her beautiful family and life. Thinking about how lucky she is to have such nice things, considering where she came from. She jolts up, finally snapping back to reality. Realizing some important information. It's been 20 minutes since she sent Jordan to take Layla to the bathroom.

Jordan is Carla’s fiance and Layla is their 3 year old daughter, 3 1⁄2 if you ask Layla. Jordan and Carla met each other in their freshman year of high school. They are the complete opposite of each other when it comes to… well everything. He comes from a rich family that grew up in the suburbs. She comes from a less privileged family, some would say poor, and had to fight to even go to highschool. But like they all say, opposites attract.
Carla sits and waits for a few more minutes. Maybe they got lost. Or maybe Layla had to do a little more than just pee. But she can't help but to think something bad has happened. She feels it in her gut. She paces back and forth as 5 more minutes pass. Overtime, 10 minutes has now passed and she decides to go look for them. As she walks towards the rest rooms she sees Jordan walking around frantically, without Layla.
“Where’s Layla,” Carla asks approaching Jordan.
“I don’t know,” he mumbles.
“What?”
“I don’t know, Carla. She went into the bathroom and never came out,” he says a little louder this time, a little too loud if you ask me, but i’m just the narrator.
“Please don’t tell me you lost my daughter,” she says, tears forming in her eyes.
“Our daughter.”
“No, my daughter because if it was your daughter you would have cared enough to make sure she was ok and wouldn't have lost her. How in the world do you lose a child anyways?”
“I don’t know. She went into the ladies bathroom and I waited outside for her so I wouldn't get bashed by the women. Then 10 minutes later she didn't come out and I got worried and went inside to look for her and she wasn't there.”
“How, Jordan? You were standing here the whole time, so how would she be able to walk out of the bathroom without you noticing?”
“I did get a drink of water from the fountain, but other than that I didn't take my eyes off of her,” he says, as he blinks back his tears.

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They really removed my book 🙄 I was getting kinda famous on here ngl
But anyways im writing a story and its for an assignment
                                        Taken
Carla lay on the warm grainy sand as the sun shines onto her face, highlighting her melanated skin. Drifting away thinking about her beautiful family and life. Thinking about how lucky she is to have such nice things, considering where she came from. She jolts up, finally snapping back to reality. Realizing some important information. It's been 20 minutes since she sent Jordan to take Layla to the bathroom.

Jordan is Carla’s fiance and Layla is their 3 year old daughter, 3 1⁄2 if you ask Layla. Jordan and Carla met each other in their freshman year of high school. They are the complete opposite of each other when it comes to… well everything. He comes from a rich family that grew up in the suburbs. She comes from a less privileged family, some would say poor, and had to fight to even go to highschool. But like they all say, opposites attract.
Carla sits and waits for a few more minutes. Maybe they got lost. Or maybe Layla had to do a little more than just pee. But she can't help but to think something bad has happened. She feels it in her gut. She paces back and forth as 5 more minutes pass. Overtime, 10 minutes has now passed and she decides to go look for them. As she walks towards the rest rooms she sees Jordan walking around frantically, without Layla.
“Where’s Layla,” Carla asks approaching Jordan.
“I don’t know,” he mumbles.
“What?”
“I don’t know, Carla. She went into the bathroom and never came out,” he says a little louder this time, a little too loud if you ask me, but i’m just the narrator. 
“Please don’t tell me you lost my daughter,” she says, tears forming in her eyes.
“Our daughter.”
“No, my daughter because if it was your daughter you would have cared enough to make sure she was ok and wouldn't have lost her. How in the world do you lose a child anyways?”
“I don’t know. She went into the ladies bathroom and I waited outside for her so I wouldn't get bashed by the women. Then 10 minutes later she didn't come out and I got worried and went inside to look for her and she wasn't there.”
“How, Jordan? You were standing here the whole time, so how would she be able to walk out of the bathroom without you noticing?” 
“I did get a drink of water from the fountain, but other than that I didn't take my eyes off of her,” he says, as he blinks back his tears.

Lunaa · Answer

oh i see

JoeMamaExe · Answer

thats rlly good better than i can do
waht grade are you in?

curlyheadbella · Answer

@joemamaexe wrote:

thats rlly good better than i can do waht grade are you in?

11th and it could be better but i gotta stretch out the sentences and stuff

JoeMamaExe · Answer

well i am in 9th so it shows why your better

curlyheadbella · Answer

@joemamaexe wrote:

well i am in 9th so it shows why your better

Lol yuh

2kayaa · Answer

this is trash bella . 
nah im jp. its good

keiraa · Answer

this is really good

curlyheadbella · Answer

@2kayaa wrote:

this is trash bella . nah im jp. its good

Ik it is

curlyheadbella · Answer

@keiraa wrote:

this is really good

Thx🙂

Makena1234 · Answer

i love ypur book it so cool i want to be a writer like you

curlyheadbella · Answer

@makena1234 wrote:

i love ypur book it so cool i want to be a writer like you

Aww thank you sm 🤗 and just btw this isnt my book, my book is better ngl

Axolotl · Answer

Great book! Thanks for sharing it with us!!!