So I'm writing a poem for something and I want to know how it is, I will take any criticism good or bad

Nevermore
Shall I deal with this
Nevermore
Shall I live with it
Nevermore
When they ask
Nevermore
To the ones that last
Nevermore
Then I drench the world in flames
Nevermore
Then I show the world my flaws
Nevermore
Shall they call
Nevermore
Shall the tears fall

Question

So I'm writing a poem for something and I want to know how it is, I will take any criticism good or bad

Nevermore
Shall I deal with this
Nevermore
Shall I live with it
Nevermore
When they ask
Nevermore
To the ones that last
Nevermore 
Then I drench the world in flames
Nevermore 
Then I show the world my flaws
Nevermore
Shall they call
Nevermore 
Shall the tears fall

mybleedingheart · Answer

i really like it its amazing

Noobsabotes · Answer

I like it

SatanicDevil · Answer

It's nice or whatever.

Noobsabotes · Answer

and I just got in trouble

AspenIsBest · Answer

@mybleedingheart wrote:

i really like it its amazing

Thank you!!!

Tbone · Answer

Eh I ain't like it, it coulda been better it is the same crap everyone writes about no one is creative anymore.

Demonofsatan · Answer

@satanicdevil wrote:

It's nice or whatever.

LMAOOOO

SatanicDevil · Answer

@demonofsatan wrote:

@satanicdevil wrote:

It's nice or whatever.

LMAOOOO

Its is, or whatever yknow.

Demonofsatan · Answer

@satanicdevil wrote:

@demonofsatan wrote:

@satanicdevil wrote:

It's nice or whatever.

LMAOOOO

Its is, or whatever yknow.

Ye it's wtv...

Tbone · Answer

It like you go into a coffee shop you'll hear the same thing until open mic night ends, no originality

AspenIsBest · Answer

@tbone wrote:

It like you go into a coffee shop you'll hear the same thing until open mic night ends, no originality

Thanks for this!!

Axolotl · Answer

This is a great poem! Simple but great! Keep up the great work!

nevertrvst · Answer

W

AriesR0se · Answer

Oh that is really beautiful and well written. You did amazing. I loved it.

OLIVER69 · Answer

I like it, it kinda reminds me of the movie Wednesday and how this would be how she describes her school.

kpop420 · Answer

This is amazing, keep going, and do more.

ashttonsix · Answer

cute sweet and nice

WoahthtsTav · Answer

@tbone wrote:

Eh I ain't like it, it coulda been better it is the same crap everyone writes about no one is creative anymore.

dang yu rude on everbody posts

ashttonsix · Answer

it good i like it

LillPerson · Answer

10/10 good job

LillPerson · Answer

@woahthtstav wrote:

@tbone wrote:

Eh I ain't like it, it coulda been better it is the same crap everyone writes about no one is creative anymore.

dang yu rude on everbody posts

He was kinda right about this tho, u will do better if you write a different poem.

AspenIsBest · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

I like it, it kinda reminds me of the movie Wednesday and how this would be how she describes her school.

ok so i wrote it before i watched it, but now i realize its the name of the school- oops

LillPerson · Answer

@aspenisbest wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

I like it, it kinda reminds me of the movie Wednesday and how this would be how she describes her school.

ok so i wrote it before i watched it, but now i realize its the name of the school- oops

Hey right one about family or happiness and not about sadness.

LillPerson · Answer

@lillperson wrote:

@aspenisbest wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

I like it, it kinda reminds me of the movie Wednesday and how this would be how she describes her school.

ok so i wrote it before i watched it, but now i realize its the name of the school- oops

Hey right one about family or happiness and not about sadness.

cause you know, everyone is talking about numb pain sadness, and how their life sucks

Arieonna · Answer

i love the poem awsome job

Arieonna · Answer

has awazing words to it

Questionguy · Answer

Good, but "nevermore" has been over used with rhythmical usage.

CutieKittyGirl539 · Answer

its ok

lovinggabsxx · Answer

This is amazing