Question

wrote a short what do yall think
Five years ago, It all seemed like some silly game. Like a game that I could play for hours without getting bored, you were like a drug and I was addicted. It was love at first sight and now here we are five years later still so in love, you are now the father to 2 beautiful baby boys, and we live in our dream house the one we thought of on our second date. here we are five years later still so in love. I look down at the golden-encrusted picture frame sitting on the hospital drawer next to me that holds the picture of us on our wedding day, I pick it up and hold it close to my heart, and a tear drops from my swollen eyes "I'm sorry our time is cut short" I whisper softly to the picture. "I love you, Michele" 

Answer 1

for the people that read this Michele is the husband not the one who is telling the story and stuff

Answer 2

SOUNDS AMAZINGGGG!!! Could tell you put a lot of thought into this story!!! Keep it upppp!!! I belieev you could do more :)