Here's a poem:

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Here's a poem:

OLIVER69 · Answer

The night was cold
His hands were hot
Debris flew in the air
Night so silent
In the dark he knew
He knew someones there

He laughed
He cried
He ran
All while it was night
He stopped
Panting
Then a hand,
Touched his shoulder

He saw a man,
Face turning red
Heart beating fast
Looks away
The man turns his face
To face him
Laid his lips on his.

It was a dream 
All to good
He remembers the man
Sees him on the street
And smiles

OLIVER69 · Answer

I made and came up with this, what yall think?

MidniteSunny · Answer

Ish an interesting story, love it ! gj !!!

OLIVER69 · Answer

@midnitesunny wrote:

Ish an interesting story, love it ! gj !!!

thx

ItzBecca · Answer

That was.. very unexpected. But I think you did an amazing job!! Love it!

OLIVER69 · Answer

@itzbecca wrote:

That was.. very unexpected. But I think you did an amazing job!! Love it!

Thank you so much!!

ItzBecca · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@itzbecca wrote:

That was.. very unexpected. But I think you did an amazing job!! Love it!

Thank you so much!!

Ofc. I definitely think you should do some more. You're really good. <33

OLIVER69 · Answer

@itzbecca wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@itzbecca wrote:

That was.. very unexpected. But I think you did an amazing job!! Love it!

Thank you so much!!

Ofc. I definitely think you should do some more. You're really good. <33

For sure I will!!

ItzBecca · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@itzbecca wrote:

@oliver69 wrote:

@itzbecca wrote:

That was.. very unexpected. But I think you did an amazing job!! Love it!

Thank you so much!!

Ofc. I definitely think you should do some more. You're really good. <33

For sure I will!!

Okay!

soccerpro7 · Answer

wow thats actually rlly good lol nice job

OLIVER69 · Answer

@soccerpro7 wrote:

wow thats actually rlly good lol nice job

thx

ANgelsBACK · Answer

This poem....SO GOOD. keep writing<33

ShadowOfDeath · Answer

Hm. Not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

OLIVER69 · Answer

@angelsback wrote:

This poem....SO GOOD. keep writing<33

<3

OLIVER69 · Answer

@shadowofdeath wrote:

Hm. Not bad at all. Keep up the good work.

Thx

ANgelsBACK · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

@angelsback wrote:

This poem....SO GOOD. keep writing<33

<3