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Tbone:

We fightin everyday We wanna walk away We needa take a break But I don't want you to go away I can't stand alone but you're always in my way I feel like I'm guilt tripping you with everything I say Want you to open up so I try and do the same Everytime we get emotional we cause eachother pain But it's them moments when you smile When you look my in my eyes I know my life will be alright.. You're like a godamn drug i cannot say goodbye I'm afraid if I do that you might die I don't wanna live without You're my #1 My Mrs Rodriguez You are the one I look at all these other girl Thick and fine They look so tempting But they're just not the same The emotions they feel are lame I know so much about you Yet I know so little There's a lotta stories to tell But it hurts We don't wanna reopen those wounds Cause we don't wanna end up in a hearse My memaw just died I wish I went first But I know life's getting hard I know you need your space I'll still be your Mr Rodriguez at the end of the day You tore down my walls and you made me feel pain I enjoy it though and i hope you feel the same We may not be married right now But I promise we will be one day I'll never let you go I'll always wait for you no matter how long it takes.. Yeah.. but it's easier said than done Right know i just wanna grab the damn gun If it wasn't for us i wouldn't be here right now You have no idea how much I love you And the amount of people who've seen me like this is very few I'm sorry I keep hurting you I'm sorry I'm not enough I don't know what to do I just want you to feel loved Babygirl you're my boo My number one thang My top priority next to myself I know you don't wanna be first You wanna see me better myself If that's what you want Woman I'll do it Ill stay on my knees Pleading with you to stay It might make me weak and a simp but that's okay I don't feel nothing without you All the voices come back I see his face again And i wanna smoke crack I'm tired of this love song It's always the same track We needs do something to change We needs both open up And our thoughts should be exchanged We can't keep bottling it up We won't work out like that This is from the bottom of my heart We need to meet in the middle We gotta stand together We have to stand with our loved ones And face this cruel world together Remember how it was? That first night we met? Thought I was a girl I didn't know then That you were the one Without i just wanna say I swear to God that I'm done

HeartsForLedger86:

🖤🖤🖤

Tbone:

I'm sorry that i hurt you I'm sorry I'm not enough I'm sorry I'm controlling and possessive I know you had enough But trust me It's hard for me too I wanna love you how you need it But I don't know what to do Guess we should start taking our advice Do what we tell others to do and stop with all the fights Listen to eachothers feeling Listen to our thoughts Explain how we feel and then you know what? We'll meet in the middle make eachother happy A marriage is a compromise and we haven't been great lately That just how we are We hurt and hurt and hurt We're trying out best but sometimes it doesn't work I say sum and it makes you mad But the thing that i said was how i really felt Now i got you going back into ya shell I feel like i can't open up now or it's gunna guilt trip you If you wanna leave then leave I'll still be here forever You're my cancer babe And I'm your Scorpio You're the over thinker I'm there quiet one You keep your thoughts and emotions handled I'm all over the olace

MidniteSunny:

chu reposted it ! ish pwettiness still holds ze second time around m8 still gj

Tbone:

@midnitesunny wrote:
chu reposted it ! ish pwettiness still holds ze second time around m8 still gj
thank you, my other would be removed bc some idiots were harassing me smh

Tbone:

Medals 3 Right now we got a daughter One-day we can have a son I'm looking forward to our future Baby you're the one I know you want ya space And i know I'm not enough Three inches can't satisfy anyone But I'll still try cuz baby you're my Hun I'll wait for you until the day my heart is done I'll always be here I'll be whatever you need Babygirl i love you, just pelase

Tbone:

@pennalopee

danielfootball123:

i hate army ppl

danielfootball123:

they suck

LillPerson:

good poem

thatgirlcrazy:

I really like it

Tbone:

@danielfootball123 wrote:
i hate army ppl
Whay

Tbone:

@lillperson wrote:
good poem
Thnx

Tbone:

@thatgirlcrazy wrote:
I really like it
Thnx

TinydinoUwU:

bro 0-0 u rlly wrote that for penny smh but ehem okie

Laylalyssa:

nice poem, u should name it ''toxic relationship "

Laylalyssa:

bro what the hell is a memaw and why did it die 💀💀

Tbone:

@tinydinouwu wrote:
bro 0-0 u rlly wrote that for penny smh but ehem okie
Is it so wrong? I love her bro idc what u say I'ma marry her one-day and Leo will walk her down the isle and I'll be at the latter waiting for her smiling i will change everything for her

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
bro what the hell is a memaw and why did it die 💀💀
U ain't raised southern you wouldnt understand

Laylalyssa:

yea thats why im askin

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
nice poem, u should name it ''toxic relationship "
And we are toxic but we're trying our best we're not going to give up on eachother we have lows and we focus on them alot but when our sad thoughts are gone i make her smile and laugh and she is becoming better we just need time for her to get better and I'll walk through her journey with her like i promised no matter what

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
yea thats why im askin
Memaw is what we use for grandmother or in my case great grandmother

Tbone:

It's pronounced meh maw

Laylalyssa:

u guys met on qc?

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
u guys met on qc?
I know where this is going but yes smh and normally I wouldn't b like this w someone online but she's diffrent

Laylalyssa:

nah bro when yall get married lmk fr cus that would be crazy for a qc relationship to last that long

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
nah bro when yall get married lmk fr cus that would be crazy for a qc relationship to last that long
Bett

Laylalyssa:

"When i first looked into your username, i knew you were the one"

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
"When i first looked into your username, i knew you were the one"
Lmaoooo nahh we met cuz me and my our ex friend Alexandra was making up after a big fight nd we was on a vc nd mmm i never knew she would be the one but this woman has changed me for the better or for the worse

Laylalyssa:

what did she change if u dont mind me askin

Tbone:

@laylalyssa wrote:
what did she change if u dont mind me askin
Dmed it to u

Arieonna:

OMG i love thus poem so much i argue with all my cousins ever single day

Tbone:

@arieonna wrote:
OMG i love thus poem so much i argue with all my cousins ever single day
0.0 Thank you

TheTiredCat:

no offense but a toxic relationships isn't SUPPOSED to last--because it's toxic. toxic isn't a compliment--if anything, it's a warning. and ngl, if you and them are fighting every single day, don't expect it to last-- imma also just say ahead of time that if they've changed you for the better or "for the worse", then that's also something that should be addressed----i hope that your ex-friend and you get back together after you see how dark a turn you might take if this "relationship" of yours actually goes anywhere... PS: lovers are supposed to be there for each other, not fight constantly. there are supposed to be boundaries and there should be minimal fighting at most; otherwise, it's just a doomed relationship. you may be going down a dark path, but don't expect it to get better when you put yourself in these situations, putting your mental and possibly even physical health on the line for a love-life. i hope you get the help you need and that sooner or later you realize just the trap you've caught yourself into. been there done that...i'm better now. i won't go into detail due to this place being on a public platform, but just trust me when i say i've gone through my fair share. hopefully, you'll go through yours too so that you'll learn what's right and wrong when it comes to having a HEALTHY and LONG-LASTING relationship. good day and goodbye.

Tbone:

@thetiredcat wrote:
no offense but a toxic relationships isn't SUPPOSED to last--because it's toxic. toxic isn't a compliment--if anything, it's a warning. and ngl, if you and them are fighting every single day, don't expect it to last-- imma also just say ahead of time that if they've changed you for the better or "for the worse", then that's also something that should be addressed----i hope that your ex-friend and you get back together after you see how dark a turn you might take if this "relationship" of yours actually goes anywhere... PS: lovers are supposed to be there for each other, not fight constantly. there are supposed to be boundaries and there should be minimal fighting at most; otherwise, it's just a doomed relationship. you may be going down a dark path, but don't expect it to get better when you put yourself in these situations, putting your mental and possibly even physical health on the line for a love-life. i hope you get the help you need and that sooner or later you realize just the trap you've caught yourself into. been there done that...i'm better now. i won't go into detail due to this place being on a public platform, but just trust me when i say i've gone through my fair share. hopefully, you'll go through yours too so that you'll learn what's right and wrong when it comes to having a HEALTHY and LONG-LASTING relationship. good day and goodbye.
This might be toxic sure but we'll work things out we don't care what the world thinks i am with her to make her smile sure we make eachother sad but still that's apart of every relationship it just seems like we've been sad a lot lately but at the same time right after than my emotions will get scattered again I'll smile and start stuttering and she'll laugh at me and we have so many good times I just didn't put them here because I was n a depressing mood

Tbone:

I know you're just trying to help but save your breath we have so many good times and so Manny plans that the bad times are normally so far and few between

Tbone:

We've just been sad what with memaw dying and all but I'm an overthinker and i focus on the negative and always assume the worse

TheTiredCat:

@tbone wrote:
@thetiredcat wrote:
no offense but a toxic relationships isn't SUPPOSED to last--because it's toxic. toxic isn't a compliment--if anything, it's a warning. and ngl, if you and them are fighting every single day, don't expect it to last-- imma also just say ahead of time that if they've changed you for the better or "for the worse", then that's also something that should be addressed----i hope that your ex-friend and you get back together after you see how dark a turn you might take if this "relationship" of yours actually goes anywhere... PS: lovers are supposed to be there for each other, not fight constantly. there are supposed to be boundaries and there should be minimal fighting at most; otherwise, it's just a doomed relationship. you may be going down a dark path, but don't expect it to get better when you put yourself in these situations, putting your mental and possibly even physical health on the line for a love-life. i hope you get the help you need and that sooner or later you realize just the trap you've caught yourself into. been there done that...i'm better now. i won't go into detail due to this place being on a public platform, but just trust me when i say i've gone through my fair share. hopefully, you'll go through yours too so that you'll learn what's right and wrong when it comes to having a HEALTHY and LONG-LASTING relationship. good day and goodbye.
This might be toxic sure but we'll work things out we don't care what the world thinks i am with her to make her smile sure we make eachother sad but still that's apart of every relationship it just seems like we've been sad a lot lately but at the same time right after than my emotions will get scattered again I'll smile and start stuttering and she'll laugh at me and we have so many good times I just didn't put them here because I was n a depressing mood
I know you didn't; but here's the thing...that's where you're wrong: you don't make each other sad...that's not how a relationship works...i was once in a relationship that was so toxic...they'd lie about me behind my back, they LEFT me for their ex at THEIR sleepover when i was in a dark place and was contemplating bad things, lying to me saying their phone died...things like that...they cheated on me the last day we were in said-relationship because they got feelings again FOR that ex. i'd also like to add that i broke down so many times even before i knew of them talking down about me behind my back; they would swap places in stories between me and them, making them the victim and me the bad guy. it was a horrible experience and i refuse to ever go through that again...people shouldn't make each other sad, but happy. if you're going to work things out with them, you'd best not stall or else it'll most-likely never work... set boundaries, talk with them about your concerns, and make sure that you and them take a small break to try and let each other figure yourselves' out okay? just to make things better for both parties, get each other in a good mental state, and just start over in a healthier version of said-relationship. i know you didn't put this post here because you were depressed, rather, because it's a way of expressing yourself--that's what writing is, as well as music, art, and poetic literature. it's a way to vent--and i know you may not fully see it now, but just know that there's a reason for everything, okay? just...try to put your mental health over a relationship--for your own sake and for hers. if you truly love her? you'll learn each others' limits and respect them, even if one of you try to push past that for a relationship...not just for you--for her, too.

Tbone:

No I'm not putting anything above her she is my one if she wasn't then i wouldn't be here rn i would have honestly killed myself months ago

TheTiredCat:

@tbone wrote:
No I'm not putting anything above her she is my one if she wasn't then i wouldn't be here rn i would have honestly killed myself months ago
that's what i said in that exact same relationship. i'm not going to argue, but if you don't...you may just hurt yourself anyways. i know that from experience.

TinydinoUwU:

same smh 0-0

Lunaa:

uhhm this is nice

Lunaa:

oh u venting.. ermmm

Tbone:

@lunaa wrote:
uhhm this is nice
Just idk ATP if ya like it nice if ya don't srry I'm not better

Astrid1:

I'm not gonna read all of that, unfortunately. But from what I had read, it's kind of sad, and I'm glad you guys are both trying <3

Tbone:

@astrid1 wrote:
I'm not gonna read all of that, unfortunately. But from what I had read, it's kind of sad, and I'm glad you guys are both trying <3
Yeah it seems like we're always sad but it's them moments i look into her eyes and grin make her smile that I'm living for rn

FrogGirlEmmy:

Woah W song bro, he the next eminem.

Tbone:

@froggirlemmy wrote:
Woah W song bro, he the next eminem.
Thnx, W

Lunaa:

@tbone wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
uhhm this is nice
Just idk ATP if ya like it nice if ya don't srry I'm not better
what even happened?

Ronaldo23:

whats the uqestion?

Ronaldo23:

ah nvm

Tbone:

It's nothing, I'll get over it

Lunaa:

is it someone about qc

Ronaldo23:

@lunaa wrote:
is it someone about qc
lol thats what im sayin im lost

Tbone:

I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..

Lunaa:

@ronaldo23 wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
is it someone about qc
lol thats what im sayin im lost
fr i dont even know what fully happened

Lunaa:

@tbone wrote:
I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..
so your sad about someone online and never seen they face?

Tbone:

It was made for one particular person but I figured she might think I'm ashamed of her and am in love with her I'm ok with people thinking in a simp and toxic i just want her

Ronaldo23:

@lunaa wrote:
@ronaldo23 wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
is it someone about qc
lol thats what im sayin im lost
fr i dont even know what fully happened
ya fr just came on and i see this

Lunaa:

@ronaldo23 wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
@ronaldo23 wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
is it someone about qc
lol thats what im sayin im lost
fr i dont even know what fully happened
ya fr just came on and i see this
LOL well online love yk

Ronaldo23:

thats why u dont date online

PoseidonGodOfTheSea:

Nice job mate

Ronaldo23:

smg get like me

Ronaldo23:

smh

Tbone:

@lunaa wrote:
@tbone wrote:
I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..
so your sad about someone online and never seen they face?
No actually we have and to each their own anyways if this lifestyle isn't for you then that is fine but you don't know what Truman and emotions that you've never felt before can do to you and you don't know much much one person can change your life with three simple words

Lunaa:

@tbone wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
@tbone wrote:
I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..
so your sad about someone online and never seen they face?
No actually we have and to each their own anyways if this lifestyle isn't for you then that is fine but you don't know what Truman and emotions that you've never felt before can do to you and you don't know much much one person can change your life with three simple words
ive been broken up with before like multiple times wytb

Ronaldo23:

@tbone wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
@tbone wrote:
I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..
so your sad about someone online and never seen they face?
No actually we have and to each their own anyways if this lifestyle isn't for you then that is fine but you don't know what Truman and emotions that you've never felt before can do to you and you don't know much much one person can change your life with three simple words
i mean luna prob gets it irl which should be the only way yk not loving a screen

Lunaa:

@ronaldo23 wrote:
@tbone wrote:
yaaa
@lunaa wrote:
@tbone wrote:
I'ma just go back to how i was, heartless. don't ask questions just feedback plz any and all is welcome..
so your sad about someone online and never seen they face?
No actually we have and to each their own anyways if this lifestyle isn't for you then that is fine but you don't know what Truman and emotions that you've never felt before can do to you and you don't know much much one person can change your life with three simple words
i mean luna prob gets it irl which should be the only way yk not loving a screen

skitzzz:

🫠

Lunaa:

sure do

PoseidonGodOfTheSea:

man what's wrong Tbone?

Ronaldo23:

lol w

Ronaldo23:

i mean u can make friends online sure but never date simply wont work

Lunaa:

ion like my reading work cause i barley get it

Lunaa:

@ronaldo23 wrote:
i mean u can make friends online sure but never date simply wont work
sometimes it works

Ronaldo23:

@lunaa wrote:
@ronaldo23 wrote:
i mean u can make friends online sure but never date simply wont work
sometimes it works
key word sometimes lol

Lunaa:

@ronaldo23 wrote:
@lunaa wrote:
@ronaldo23 wrote:
i mean u can make friends online sure but never date simply wont work
sometimes it works
key word sometimes lol
yeah..

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