Happy Valentines day,
in my ela class i was supposed to write a poem with a rhyme scheme of abab, about heartbreak, love, or rejection. i chose to write about my own experience with heartbreak. feedback would be appreciated
The poem is called "And To You"

I have known you since forever
But i never really knew you
All the times we were on and off whatever,
But you always had better things to do

You were never the right person however,
You had a way that kept me crawling back to you
Everyone told me it would get better
But we both knew that wasn't true

You thought you were so clever
When you decided to find someone new
You broke my heart into pieces
I will never forget you

Question

Happy Valentines day, 
in my ela class i was supposed to write a poem with a rhyme scheme of abab, about heartbreak, love, or rejection. i chose to write about my own experience with heartbreak. feedback would be appreciated 
The poem is called "And To You"

I have known you since forever
But i never really knew you
All the times we were on and off whatever,
But you always had better things to do

You were never the right person however,
You had a way that kept me crawling back to you
Everyone told me it would get better
But we both knew that wasn't true

You thought you were so clever 
When you decided to find someone new
You broke my heart into pieces 
I will never forget you

Astrid1 · Answer

I love how well you rhymed this, and omg the motion put into it. It's so clear, you're a great writer!

Astrid1 · Answer

*emotion,  whoopsies c'x

strwbxrii5O4 · Answer

@astrid1 wrote:

I love how well you rhymed this, and omg the motion put into it. It's so clear, you're a great writer!

I appreciate that.

JayBirdcrazy · Answer

SLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

strwbxrii5O4 · Answer

@jaybirdcrazy wrote:

SLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

slayy

OLIVER69 · Answer

This is very good, my poems are trash but GOOD work!! < 3

Krissy525 · Answer

so good

strwbxrii5O4 · Answer

@oliver69 wrote:

This is very good, my poems are trash but GOOD work!! < 3

thank you, ill have to read some of yours sometime i doubt there bad:)

strwbxrii5O4 · Answer

@krissy525 wrote:

so good

thank you