Question

Happy Valentines day,
in my ela class i was supposed to write a poem with a rhyme scheme of abab, about heartbreak, love, or rejection. i chose to write about my own experience with heartbreak. feedback would be appreciated
The poem is called "And To You"

I have known you since forever
But i never really knew you
All the times we were on and off whatever,
But you always had better things to do

You were never the right person however,
You had a way that kept me crawling back to you
Everyone told me it would get better
But we both knew that wasn't true

You thought you were so clever
When you decided to find someone new
You broke my heart into pieces
I will never forget you

Answer 1

I love how well you rhymed this, and omg the motion put into it. It's so clear, you're a great writer!

Answer 2

*emotion, whoopsies c'x

Answer 3

SLAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

Answer 4

This is very good, my poems are trash but GOOD work!! < 3

Answer 5

so good