Question

english help

Answer 1

is this a good claim?

Answer 2

@jhonyy9

Answer 3

@vocaloid

Answer 4

Hmm it’s alright but I think you should as to why

Answer 5

Go more in depth instead of stating reasons, for example go in depth about what rights a person has and explain a little of those listed reasons like religion

Answer 6

There should not be any real-world consequences for what someone posts on social media, such as participating in rightful concerted activity online which can lead to further improvement in a workplace, unlike any protected activity about religion, race, or gender that can be really disrespectful towards others.  

Answer 7

@salttheloser is this better

Answer 8

Actually claims are supposed to be clear and concise. Generally around two lines but it's okay to go a little bit over that. I thought your first one did it better than this longer, second one, minus the word "really."

Answer 9

it says single sentence so im just adding everything on to one

Answer 10

Yes, a single sentence, buttttt short. It's not supposed to have every single bit of information on the topic, just a to-the-point statement that gets your point across.

Answer 11

more in "depth"

Answer 12

I'm honestly not sure? It sounds like they wanted you to add more to it, but I don't think you rlly should if it means adding more length and wordiness to the sentence.

Answer 13

yeh ^^ best of luck

Answer 14

Probably sumthin like "What we say and do on social media is just as important as in real life, therefore there should be real-world consequences tied to what we post."
sumthin like dat yk

Answer 15

I just made it up m8, sure u can use it.

Answer 16

ight ty bro

Answer 17

what you think? @midnitesunny

Answer 18

take the word "yes" and "any" out and i think it's fine

Answer 19

o yea fasho

Answer 20

There's multiple ways to write a hook. You could use a quote, ask a question, show a statistic, use rhetorical questions, tell a story, etc. Think abt ur topic and one of these techniques. To me the easiest is a question. For example, it could be, "Where would society be without rules and regulation?" or i suppose u could start with a statistic abt how many people use social media and den introduce consequences from there. Idk if any of that made sense lol-

Answer 21

It sounds good to me