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i tryed to write a scary storyie hope its not bad
Once i was in my room playing with my sister then i here a little giggle i was creepy out. Then my sister said” what was that sound” she said i said”i don't know i should go see what it is u stay here” so i went to see what it was we was home alone with no one just with my little sister when i went down there i saw something little it was a girl it did not look like my sister it had a creepy face i did not know what to do so i when back up to my room were my sister was when i did my sister was crying i ask her if she was ok she said”i saw something” i told her not to worry. At night i hear the giggle again and it was in are room i screamed my sister saw it too be both when to the living room it was there by the room we did not know what to do so we went to are mom and dad's room.tell we heard the sound of mom and dad when we did they ask where we were.me and my sister went down to where are mom and dad were but the girl was there with a knife i screamed she came over to me and i asked her what she wanted from us she pointed at the door next to me i new she wanted me to go down there she wanted me to bring my sister. It's like she trying to tell us something but i did not know so i did what she wanted me to do my sister came with me when we open the door there smelled something eww are mom and dad said don't go down there but i had to the door went shut on us we went down there there were dead bodys there was even a book of people. I look in it it had the same girl and it looks like my mom and dad but they look dead. My sister said does that mean that are real mom and dad are dead….i said….y-yes….they are….my sister was so scared that she said that they must have killed them to kidnap us….i said yep we better get out of here or we be dead ourselves when we try to we saw something it looked like are mom and dad but a ghost they said” hello sweets we miss u” we both cried “ they said it's time for us to go ok” we said bye after that we came were fake mom and dad were they both were dead after that the ghost who got killed here toke care of us…
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Answer 1

GHOSTEH RULES L SKELLEH

Answer 2

xDDD

Answer 3

Anyways, nice story good job!

Answer 4

I like the story although you could add "" around the speaking lines. Also Skelleh is gonna take down Ghosteh.

Answer 5

nice story xXbloodyvibesXx

Answer 6

good job i think its good i think u should write more

Answer 7

It’s pretty spooky

Answer 8

Wow.that's Apollo GOOD.AND CREEPY.FOR.SURE

Answer 9

Thank you for sharing your scary story with us. The story has a good sense of tension and suspense, and the use of dialogue and descriptive language helps to create a sense of fear and unease.

The concept of the ghostly parents and the dead bodies in the basement adds an eerie element to the story, and the ending with the ghost taking care of the children has a bittersweet and haunting quality.

There are a few areas where the story could be improved, such as the spelling and grammar errors, and the pacing of the story could be adjusted to build more tension and suspense. Overall, with some revision and editing, this story has the potential to be a truly frightening and engaging tale.

Answer 10

noice :]

Answer 11

This is wild