Here’s a poem

Roses are red
Violets are blue
there is a boy who wants to date
I don’t know who he is
But he is lonely
I might like him
But I’m not for sure
Nor do I want to be broken
He spoken to me and asked to date
I am a brunette
with brown eyes
I like to be flexible
And do flips
We just meet
but I’m not for sure
I gave him my number and asked for more

This is so bad tell me what you think

Question

Here’s a poem

Roses are red 
Violets are blue 
there is a boy who wants to date 
I don’t know who he is 
But he is lonely 
I might like him 
But I’m not for sure
Nor do I want to be broken
He spoken to me and asked to date
I am a brunette 
with brown eyes 
I like to be flexible 
And do flips
We just meet 
but I’m not for sure
I gave him my number and asked for more

This is so bad tell me what you think

Marlin24k · Answer

I love it!

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

I DONT LIKE IT, IT DOESNT RHYME

MidniteSunny · Answer

none of it rhymes but ig poems dont rlly hav to rhyme, but like....there's nu general flow or rhythm either so idk how ish a poem other than the direct layout of it
gl on dat situation tho

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@isabelfriedmannbells wrote:

I DONT LIKE IT, IT DOESNT RHYME

She’s my sister I give my honest opinion

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

@lemondragon555 wrote:

@isabelfriedmannbells wrote:

I DONT LIKE IT, IT DOESNT RHYME

She’s my sister I give my honest opinion

i gave my honest opinion t.f

Lemondragon555 · Answer

And I agree with you

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

OK

Lemondragon555 · Answer

That’s what I’m saying

flowerpower52 · Answer

I’m just laughing I’m new at this lol

Lemondragon555 · Answer

I know that you asked my opinion before you posted it

ross25 · Answer

i like it good job!

wade2k23 · Answer

dont listen to all the haters. You did a good job u put some effort into it thats all that matters :)

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@ross25 wrote:

i like it good job!

Why do you think this

Lemondragon555 · Answer

I told her not to post it it’s awful

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

can yall stop replying in this ? theres dms for a reason

Lemondragon555 · Answer

What are dms

IsabelFriedmannbells · Answer

direct messages

MidniteSunny · Answer

to clarify, i wasnt hating, i was critiquing
the poem just rlly isnt much of a poem, it's like just general writing
it doesnt follow any poem guidelines, it's literally just....telling a story, so ish a narrative atp, just broken up into pieces
there's usually general rules dat guide poems and make them into...well, poems, maybe chu should research those 
butttttt ty for sharing anyways, yk ? gud on chu for trying

HotPockets14 · Answer

I like it even if it didn't ryhme you still put effort into it

borealis · Answer

it's great dante alighieri who

Lemondragon555 · Answer

But she didn’t put effort into it

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@borealis wrote:

it's great dante alighieri who

And what does this mean

borealis · Answer

he is an ice cream vendor from long ago

Shadow · Answer

Roses are red - A
Violets are blue - B
there is a boy who wants to date - C
I don’t know who he is - D 
But he is lonely - E
I might like him  - F

If you were going for a rhyme scheme (which the beginning suggests, it's typical for rhyming poems) then this doesn't really follow. The content is nice though, it's very open and honest. Thank you for sharing.

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@shadow wrote:

Roses are red - A Violets are blue - B there is a boy who wants to date - C I don’t know who he is - D But he is lonely - E I might like him - F If you were going for a rhyme scheme (which the beginning suggests, it's typical for rhyming poems) then this doesn't really follow. The content is nice though, it's very open and honest. Thank you for sharing.

She is talking about a guy who asked her to date like five minutes ago

borealis · Answer

he's lying

Lemondragon555 · Answer

On this site

HotPockets14 · Answer

Wow

Shadow · Answer

@lemondragon555 wrote:

On this site

I can imagine. I was just commenting on the work itself. It's easy to criticize, but more difficult to provide helpful criticism.

Lemondragon555 · Answer

What’s that mean

@shadow wrote:

@lemondragon555 wrote:

On this site

I can imagine. I was just commenting on the work itself. It's easy to criticize, but more difficult to provide helpful criticism.

Lemondragon555 · Answer

@wade2k23 wrote:

dont listen to all the haters. You did a good job u put some effort into it thats all that matters :)

I’m not hater I’m sister

toga · Answer

isabelfriedmannbells and
@lemondragon555

if you have anything nice to say don't say it and if she is your sister then you should build her up and give Constructional criticism and tell her what she did wrong then show her how to fix it not be mean cuz it hurts more from family then it does from strangers 
I know that from experience.

flowerpower52 · Answer

It’s fine guys thanks for sticking up for me I’m only 3 years older than her and thank you for your lobe

flowerpower52 · Answer

Love

Paofumiistrash · Answer

Eh- its not too good, it doesnt rhyme.

toga · Answer

@flowerpower52 wrote:

It’s fine guys thanks for sticking up for me I’m only 3 years older than her and thank you for your lobe

no problem and I really liked the beginning.

flowerpower52 · Answer

Thx

WDW4Life · Answer

I love it!! 🩵