Question

I wrote a poem:
Telling myself to be strong and not to cry was the worst thing of my life
We think it's wrong to cry
When its strong to cry
It feels good to cry
It's a healing process
Its safe to cry

The world has pushed us all into a whole
A whole that makes us think we're weak
Weak for doing the most natural thing ever
Cry
We choke on tears
Trying to hold them back
I don't understand it
Why are we told this

Were told to not love who we love
Were told that crying is harmful
Were told your who your born to be
Were told lies
Were told things that don't even make sense

I wish that we would all grown up
And finally realize that crying is good

Answer 1

I like it and its also relatable keep it up I would love to see more of your work

Answer 2

Its alright, kinda touches the heart.