Question

Here is chapter 5 of my story please tell me what you think. Also, You can find the rest of the stories here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/333937067-love-is-forbidden

(also if you have read the other chapters, you will know that I changed the boss's name to Jeremy)

Answer 1

Chapter Six:

I woke up very early when it was still dark out to head off to work. I quickly got dressed and just as I was leaving Caleb walked up to me, rubbing his eyes. "Daddy, where are you going?". I put my stuff down, picked him up in a cradle, and carry him to his bed. I sing him a lullaby and as he falls asleep, Axton comes up behind me. I nearly fall back onto his bed, when Axton grabs me by the waist and whispers, "Where are you going?". I smile and tell him, "I'm going to work early." I kiss him and slide out of his arms, and start to head out of the room. He grabs me and pins me to the wall. I get scared and flinch when he leans in. He backs up and asks, "What's wrong, why did you flinch, I would never hurt you." I nod and forces a smile. He kisses me and says, "When you get home we need to talk, okay?". I nod and walk out of the hotel room. I start walking to the office and as I enter no one is there yet except for Jeremy. He sees me enter, I lock the door to the building behind me and push him up against the wall. He grabs my hand takes me to his office and says, "What are you doing here?!". I was thrown off and I say, "You told me to come here yesterday". He shakes his head as two girls enter his office and kiss him on the cheek. I understood everything at that moment. I walked out of the room and left the building. I couldn't go back home, so I ran to the nearest bookstore and cried my eyes out.

Someone came up to me and asked me if everything was alright. I just nodded, pretending I heard what he said through the tears, but he sat down next to me. I kept my head buried in my knees as he said, "Talk to me, I'm here to listen to you." His voice was so calming and sweet. That I started to tell him everything. He understood because he said he was poly too and he has gone through the same things. I smiled slightly as he offered to give me a hug. I nodded and he wrapped his arms around me and I never felt such a warm embrace. We talked for hours on end and when I checked the time, it was time to go home. He helped me up and offered to walk me home. I agreed and we walked home. During the walk, I asked what his name was. He smiled and said, "You can call me Liam". I smiled and said, "It's nice to meet such a nice guy like you, Liam." We were already at the hotel and as I opened the door, he asked me what my name was and when he could see me again. I told him, "My name is Lukas and you can call me anytime". I give him my number as I hear him mumble under his breath, "I would rather call you d-daddy." I know I just met him, but something came over me. I look him in his eyes after he said that then looked at his lips. I wrapped my arms around his neck and kissed him. He didn't hold back. I forgot that I had already opened the hotel door when I hear Axton behind me. "Is this one of your guys?". He scoffs and grabs me by the arm, pulls me inside, and tells Liam, "He is busy tonight". He shuts the door on Liam and faces me.

I start to walk backward away from him as he approaches me, but I'm not quick enough. I hear Caleb's older self saying run, but I'm frozen with fear. Axton grabs me and hits me so hard in the face he bloodies my noes, he hits me a few more times as I fall to the floor. I am bleeding as Axton realized what he has done, "Babe, I am so sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you." He falls to his knees crying and I hug him. "No babe, I am sorry. it's not your fault". We just sit on the floor hugging each other. Two hours go by, we finally move, I wash my face off and lay in the bed, curled up in a ball. I fall asleep and I feel Axton's warm body spooning me. It feels so good that I forget about what happened tonight. Axton had explained to Caleb what happened and laid him down for bed.

As the sun appears above the horizon and into the room, I smile as I smell french toast. I wake up and stretch. I get up out of bed and walk into the kitchen. I see Axton making breakfast and it smells so good. I walk up behind him and hug him. As I sit down at the table, my mind keeps thinking of last night. I know some people who wouldn't want me to stay with him after he hurt me, but I love him and I can't let him go. It would hurt me and Caleb to much. Caleb came running in hugged me and sat down at the table. Axton served us our plates and we started to eat when Axton sat down. I decided to go to work today and actually do some paperwork. I grabbed my stuff after putting some clothes on and kissed both Axton and Caleb. I walk out of the hotel and down the street to the office. I exhaled, walked in, and sat down at my desk. I wasn't there to see Jeremy and it wasn't that I was mad at him for having girls, but it was how he acted like he didn't ask me to come. I just kept working when the recipient told me the boss wanted to see me. I nodded, got up, and walked to his office. I calmed my breathing down and knocked on his door. "Come in". I opened it and walked in. "You needed to see me, sir?". He stood up, walked to the door, and shut it.

"Why are you addressing me so formally?".

I scoff and cross my arms. "Seriously you don't remember yesterday?".

"Of course I do."

"Then why did you act like that and before you say something about the girls I am fine if you date women."

He reaches his hand out for me to help me sit down, but I stay standing and look away.

"Okay suit yourself, but the reason I acted like that was that those women were close with my mom and they told her everything."

I roll my eyes. "And what does that have to do with me?".

"It's just I haven't dated a guy nor less introduced them to my mom, who is extremely homophobic and sure I am a grown man, why am I listening to my mom? I just don't want to upset the only person left in my family."

"Dated?!" I of course heard everything else he said, but that stayed with me as he was speaking.

"Y-yeah and I want to apologize for yesterday. Listen to me Lukas, I am sorry and I want you in my life." He takes my hand and gets down on one knee. I am speechless, but I didn't want to get my hopes up, but then he says, "Lukas I love you, I want you to meet my mom, but I want you to marry me first." I was so shocked and excited as I covered my mouth and said, "Yes". He got up, kissed, and hugged me. I then thought of Caleb, Axton, and the new guy I met Liam. I am sure they will be fine with me getting married as long as I talk to them and gave them attention. And of course, Caleb will be my focus no matter what. My mind comes back to the present as we stop kissing, I look at the ring on my finger, and it's stunning. As we walk out of the office, Jeremy announces we are getting married to the office, of course, there are people who don't like it but there are some who support us. I kiss Jeremy on the cheek and tell him I got to get home. He grabs my hand in a flirty way and says, "Go to the hotel, pack up everything including the guy I saw and the little boy's stuff, and come to this address tomorrow". He hands me a piece of paper and kisses me. I kiss him back and I tell him I'll see him tomorrow.

I hurry to the hotel and open the door. I got off work early so Caleb was still at school, but Axton was home. I open the door and jump onto his lap. He smiles, "W-what's g-g...?". He doesn't finish the sentence when he sees the ring. "O-oh I see why you are happy". I got the urge that he was going to hit me, so I said, "Y-yes I'm engaged, this happens in a poly relationship, but we are can live together. All I want to do is make Caleb safe and happy." That's when I wished I haven't said anything. He hits me across the face, gets up, and pins me onto the floor. I try to scream, but he covers my mouth and starts beating me. I stop trying to scream and move when he finally gets off of me. He sees me laying in my own blood and cries. I did hear Caleb's older self screaming, "Fight Dad." I just couldn't fight him. Axton got up and quickly ran to get the floor cleaned up before we had to get Caleb from school. I army crawled to the bathroom and filled up the bathtub. I get into the tub as I hear the door to the hotel close. I just lie in the bathtub as I put my head under the water but get up as I think of Caleb. I suddenly have the urge to move as I move, I finish cleaning myself, then puts clothes on and call Jeremy to pick me up. I write a note telling them where I'm going then I leave and get into Jeremy's car. He starts driving when I begin to cry. He pulls over to the side of the road and says, "Please tell me what happened, you have bruises all over you and wounds that are still a little bloody."

I tell him everything through my tears. "I'm so sorry, Lukas. Is he at the hotel right now?" I nod and say, "Yes he should be back with Caleb by now." He turns the car around and heads back to the hotel. I try to stop him, but he doesn't stop and marches right up to the room. He breaks down the door and marches up to Axton and pins him up against the wall. As I am there I take Caleb into the hall, cover his ears, and as I mouth the words, "It's okay, I'm here." I cover his ears to block out the noise and at that moment I hear Jeremy yell, "If you ever touch him again, I will break your body into tiny pieces." I pick Caleb up, Jeremy walks out, puts his arm around my shoulders and we walk to his car. I put Caleb in the backseat with his seatbelt on and ride in the back with him. Jeremy drives us to his house and I get out of the car, holding Caleb as he sleeps on me. Jeremy locks the car door and we all walk into his large Soup house. We walk into a small bedroom and I lay Caleb down tucking him in. I kiss his head and crack the door I leave the room. I walk with Jeremy to his room and say, "You should get some rest." I nod and I lie down on the bed. Jeremy lies down across from me and rubs the side of my face to help me sleep. I fall asleep as I feel his warm hand moving up and down my face. We lay in and sleep in bed together.

Answer 2

Oh my gosh this is so good. Great job
You should publish this.

Answer 3

hehe i love it baby

Answer 4

Good job and i like your pfp and user name 🖤🖤🖤

Answer 5

That's good
Lol you are an amazing person lol you are talent with a gift that you were blessed with and I believe that you have more some where I can't wait until the next chapter I believe in you

Answer 6

That's good do you just come up with these yourself?