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SaltTheLoser:

Ah

SaltTheLoser:

This will be the last time, That I think about you All the things that we’ve gone through Now I go through it all alone This will be the last time I express my thoughts It’s not like you’ll ever listen to them anyway Voice calls out but you don’t answer back All the love I had is gone The person I was The moments we had Like it never happened Just a memory Now you’ve moved on and I’m stuck with these feelings Hate that you moved on Thought that would help me move past you Hate that he has you These crazy thoughts that you left behind Raising these red flags Driving me down You can’t see that you moving on has left me broken down Guess you can’t see my heart bleeding through those rose colored glasses I hate that I miss you I hate that you’re gone and I’m lost I hate those sunflowers you left on my door I hate the twisted love you left behind I hate that I caused it and you moved on I hate that you’re ok and I can’t move on I hate sitting on the floor thinking all night long I hate all these tears that I cry cause you’re gone I hate in the end that it was me who was wrong My minds gone corrupted ruining all that I want I hate that I don’t really hate you at all I’ve tried it all to forget you and move on Pretended you were dead and I should go on A ghost or a memory I guess I haven’t decided Pretended all we did was just in my head and it never happened at all Stuck in a pitiful place Stuck with self doubt Stuck with these feelings that bring me down Raising red flags I think I need help But help only comes in the shape of your your love Guess it’s over and I’m gonna die all alone Waiting for the one day that you’ll come and tell me that it’s all gonna be ok forgive me for what I’ve done Forgive all the things I’ve said and that I can move on Tell me that it’s ok for me to move on But without you I can’t move on Wondering where you are Waiting to be saved Until my last breath my heart will always be yours

CocoCammron99:

I can feel the pain in this, I love this so much

Dolphan:

I love this so much. Keep up your writing skills. This is getting somewhere. I also can too feel the pain.

killahE44:

meem

Sharkattack123:

Boring

0mega:

Beautiful writing, tells a story, and I can feel the hurt and pain, keep it up Salt.

Dolphan:

That shows real pain. I love it!!

doggofroyo:

I hate sitting on the floor thinking all night long I hate all these tears that I cry cause you’re gone pain.

brittney1jamison:

I truly feel the pain of this. I understand every word of this. I've been through something similar to this.

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