this is a song I've been working on but i am not sure how it is... i need help naming it and more lyrics, but let me know what ya'll think..!

Darkness is all around me, nothing but fear and sadness, nowhere to run, nowhere to hide, it's all around, you can't fight it, you can't hide it, so just let the fear go and let the darkness in..

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this is a song I've been working on but i am not sure how it is...  i need help naming it and more lyrics, but let me know what ya'll think..!

Darkness is all around me, nothing but fear and sadness, nowhere to run, nowhere to hide, it's all around, you can't fight it, you can't hide it, so just let the fear go and let the darkness in..

Dolphan · Answer

I can feel the pain in this. "Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide" Explains what anxiety and depression had done to us. Makes up feel like no escape. 
I love this. Keep up the great work!

Midnight97 · Answer

@dolphan wrote:

I can feel the pain in this. "Nowhere to run, nowhere to hide" Explains what anxiety and depression had done to us. Makes up feel like no escape. I love this. Keep up the great work!

thank you, really much and i try really hard to make my songs good, somethings i feel like i should give up but i keep at it

chuckthedonut · Answer

Wow, I like the descriptions you used. I feel the lyrics. ((hard to explain, but if yk, yk)) Overall, you did awesome :)

Midnight97 · Answer

@chuckthedonut wrote:

Wow, I like the descriptions you used. I feel the lyrics. ((hard to explain, but if yk, yk)) Overall, you did awesome :)

thank you

chuckthedonut · Answer

@midnight97 wrote:

@chuckthedonut wrote:

Wow, I like the descriptions you used. I feel the lyrics. ((hard to explain, but if yk, yk)) Overall, you did awesome :)

thank you

You're welcome :]. @midnitesunny, @oliver69, @arieonna, @marlin24k, @krissy525 look at this.

Nightmoon · Answer

Nice job!!!!

Midnight97 · Answer

@nightmoon wrote:

Nice job!!!!

thank you

MidniteSunny · Answer

Chu could possibly name it ze emotion/thing ur trying to describe. Or yk, wait until ish finished to think of a name for it. So far, I think ze lyrics r fine, i wish i knew ze rhythms and wut genre tho. gj and gl<3

mikewwe13 · Answer

It sounds like you're exploring some deep emotions in your song. Here are a few ideas for potential titles and additional lyrics:

Title ideas:
- Let the Darkness In
- Embracing Fear
- No Escape
- The Abyss

Additional lyrics:
- I try to run, but it just pulls me back
- The weight of my worries, it's all I can feel
- I know I should resist, but it's too strong
- In the darkness, I find a strange kind of peace
- Maybe if I let go, it will finally set me free
- I'm lost in this void, with no end in sight
- The darkness is my only friend, it's always by my side

Remember that songwriting is a creative process and there's no right or wrong way to express yourself. Keep experimenting and see where the music takes you!

Midnight97 · Answer

@mikewwe13 wrote:

It sounds like you're exploring some deep emotions in your song. Here are a few ideas for potential titles and additional lyrics: Title ideas: - Let the Darkness In - Embracing Fear - No Escape - The Abyss Additional lyrics: - I try to run, but it just pulls me back - The weight of my worries, it's all I can feel - I know I should resist, but it's too strong - In the darkness, I find a strange kind of peace - Maybe if I let go, it will finally set me free - I'm lost in this void, with no end in sight - The darkness is my only friend, it's always by my side Remember that songwriting is a creative process and there's no right or wrong way to express yourself. Keep experimenting and see where the music takes you!

thank you