Anxiety…
It’s always the constant feeling of dread that feels your chest…
The uneasiness and suspicion of your surroundings and the nerving feeling
The tension of it all…
Surrounded by all..but want to be surrounded by none…the feeling of tension and wanting to run and hide…
The smallest things always seem to be the biggest..the constant worrying and overthinking… the stress and the pain too much to bear…does anyone care-?..does anyone feel my pain and suffering?
…will anyone help me?.
(free poem)
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Renne:
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Renne:
I finished your request tell me what you think when you have a chance.
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MidniteSunny:
Mmmmmm oki so when chu wrote "dread that feels ur chest" did chu mean "fills" instead ? Also "the nerving feeling," did chu mean "unnerving" ? Chu mentioned tension twice in vewy close quarters as well ("The tension of it all......the feeling of tension and wanting to run and hide...") and I wonder if chu can word dat differently perhaps.
Ish a nice writing piece tho, kinda making me wanna write mah own piece about anxiety lol. Gj<333
OLIVER69:
I can actually relate to this poem. This is very close to how I feel almost every day. I always want to just disappear, so no one can look at me ever again. I always feel like people are constantly judging me and more than likely they are. No matter if it's positive or negative they are always judging. And it never makes me feel good about myself. And the thing with anxiety is that it can lead to depression if you don't seek help. And I would know because I didn't see help and I started to lose interest in all the things I was interested in and I started to cut. So anxiety can be a cause of depression and this poem can help relate to depression. These poems you right can really inform people about these illnesses. I really enjoyed this piece... Thank you for writing it...
Renne:
Of course..I hope this will help you and others as well.
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P1n3appl31:
@midnitesunny wrote:
Mmmmmm oki so when chu wrote "dread that feels ur chest" did chu mean "fills" instead ? Also "the nerving feeling," did chu mean "unnerving" ? Chu mentioned tension twice in vewy close quarters as well ("The tension of it all......the feeling of tension and wanting to run and hide...") and I wonder if chu can word dat differently perhaps.
Ish a nice writing piece tho, kinda making me wanna write mah own piece about anxiety lol. Gj<333
I do really think this is quite lovely and agree with your suggestions for change. It was missing all those things, but otherwise, bravo you certainly deserve this round of applause!
P1n3appl31:
@oliver69 wrote:
I can actually relate to this poem. This is very close to how I feel almost every day. I always want to just disappear, so no one can look at me ever again. I always feel like people are constantly judging me and more than likely they are. No matter if it's positive or negative they are always judging. And it never makes me feel good about myself. And the thing with anxiety is that it can lead to depression if you don't seek help. And I would know because I didn't see help and I started to lose interest in all the things I was interested in and I started to cut. So anxiety can be a cause of depression and this poem can help relate to depression. These poems you right can really inform people about these illnesses. I really enjoyed this piece... Thank you for writing it...
I am at a loss of words, the fact that you were able to reach out is FASCINATING I give you a hand as well. I have suffered from anxiety and depression for over 6 years now and no one really notices my suffering. I still regret all those times I lied on the tests they told me to take and took the help I was supposed to get. So I congratulate you as well, and I'll be free to talk anytime you are willing to.