Question

Found a song I wrote In 5th grade... lmk what yall' think about it

[Intro]

I'm all alone and it's getting dark

Don't have a friend to help me through this lonesome park

[Verse 1]

I'm standing on the outside, watching everyone go by

My heart's been empty for so long, why can't I find someone to try?

[Chorus]

What I wouldn't give for someone to love me

I'm so tired of being lonely, I'm so tired of being blue

Can somebody show me love and acceptance, give me something that's true?

[Verse 2]

I've been searching for a way out of this hole I'm in

Loneliness is like a prison and I need to break free again

[Chorus]

What I wouldn't give for someone to love me

I'm so tired of being lonely, I'm so tired of being blue

Can somebody show me love and acceptance, give

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[Verse 1]

I look around and all I see, is people living life in harmony

They're laughing and smiling, surrounded by friends

But I'm just here all alone again

[Chorus]

I'm missing out on all the fun, feeling left out and so undone

No one to talk to or share my days with

It's just me, alone in this mess I'm in

[Verse 2]

I wander the streets late at night, my heart so heavy with no respite

I feel so lost without a friend, like a ship without a sail to send

[Chorus]

I'm missing out on all the fun, feeling left out and so undone

No one to talk to or share my days with

It's just me, alone in this mess I'm in

[Bridge]

I want someone who understands me and makes me feel like I'm someone

But it's hard when you don’t…