I wrote a poem called Sociopath. Tell me what you think about it.

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OLIVER69 · Answer

Amongst the mysterious and gloomy forest
Begets a creature so cruel and ferocious
Consciously aware of its own destructive behavior
Deceptive in nature; unforgiving at heart
Enchanting the woodlands...

He who will get locked away,
fried in the chair, lethally injected,
gassed, hung, or shot by a firing squad,
resides right in your hometown,
right in your...

Oh, how I thought, what a perfect crime.
As I had spent so much time,
plotting it out, every day in my mind.
Until I felt, it was…
I was a tread on others without care
Hiding behind my tyrannical God
No longer will you appease my lies
With a humored smile and nod

‘Cause it’s all about me…

sociopath, Sociopath,
They say as they look at me.
Don't you touch me.
Each touch shoots poison through my veins like a lethal injection.

Sociopath, Sociopath,
I'm not your baby.
Loosen your grip from my being,
And let me free.

ElexusQuimby · Answer

Damnn man.  Thats lit.  I love it.

SnoKido · Answer

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Midnight97 · Answer

woah that's sick, i love it! keep up the great work

MRJoker · Answer

I love it

FrogGirlEmmy · Answer

so good

lovinggabsxx · Answer

Amazing

Packgod · Answer

I really like what you did here, with the different rhyming techniques and the deep thought put into it. Good job, @oliver69 !

baddestgirl · Answer

This, is so cool , I really love what you write 'everything about it is so *wow*I am just awe struck "keep writing and stuff tbh☺️☺️☺️☺️my lovely friend ☺️☺️☺️☺️