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Starting my college essay :) lmk what you think.



When the time has come, you'll be shocked at what it could hold. It's almost like a journey, there are so many doors to open to explore, to find more.
My time was getting adopted at the age of 4. I didn't know what to feel because I was so young. Happy? Excited? I didn't know. I know for sure know being adopted was probably the best thing that had ever happened to me.
People ask me what it is like being adopted, and I always say that my life feels like a plant, I started off small like a seed and grew leaves, and those leaves were new chapters of my life with my new family.

They loved me and I loved them.

They treated me like I belonged there, they treated how any parents would. I finally felt like I belonged., up until 2nd grade. I would get made fun of because of the way I looked and why my hair looked like that and talked that why, and why my name was spelled like that. I was ashamed of who I was, but as I grew up I learned to love my curly hair, I learned to love my accent, I learned to love the way I talked, and I learned to love who I was.
I also say my life is like a plant because once a leaf that has bug bites and broken parts has fallen off, it's kinda like an old part of me has gotten better, as they say. ¨Out with the old, in with the new.¨ And with each leaf that grew back I feel regenerated, I feel new. People think being adopted is the most horrible thing because they think it meant my birth parents didn't want me, but it's not. I think it's a wonderful thing, that some strangers with open arms are willing to take in a 4-year-old.
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Answer 1

nice
ESSAY i can tell u put a lot of effort into writing this

Answer 2

hot very nice

Answer 3

Adoptive gang les goooooo

Answer 4

This is really good keep up the work i don't see anything wrong with it you've done amazin

Answer 5

Good job! Keep up the good work!