Question

So it seems you are toxic,

Your presence leaves a bitter taste.

You seep into my every thought,

And leave me feeling misplaced.

Your words are like venom,

And your touch like a burn,

I try to take a step away,

But to you, I always return.

You bring with you darkness,

That clouds my every day,

And though I try to fight it,

It remains, refusing to sway.

I wish I could push you away,

And be free from your grip,

But with every passing moment,

The hold you have on me grows thick.

So it seems you are toxic,

A poison to my soul,

And though I try to break away,

You have taken full control.

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Answer 1

This is so good!! I love how well your poem rhymes and it's sad and true and auuughh!! Keep doing these !! Ur so talented !!

Answer 2

Beautiful I love it, hope you do more

Answer 3

Good job @oliver69

Answer 4

Aww why thank you guys... I love this poem, I made a lot and this means a lot for you guys to say something.

Answer 5

np all your poems are beautiful and keep going on with them

Answer 6

Oh my gosh this is so goodddd as alwaysss

Answer 7

This poem is amazing. I've written a few poems, but that's better than most of them. 👌

Answer 8

Aww thank you are all so much for those kind words. I try my best when writing. < 3

Answer 9

Its seems like you do bc they are all beautiful and we all probably agree that you are one of the best poem writers <3