My new favorite poem I wrote, also I need some names so feel free to give me some.
I may make mistakes and falter at times,
And you may too, though that's hard to swallow
But now I'm enough and you should be too,
For with every mistake comes an opportunity for growth.
My weaknesses and fears, some I'll own, some I'll hide
But I won't stand for that's you try to impose on me,
For I know I'm enough and you should too,
From the center of my being - I feel it to be true.
I've seen and been through a lot in life,
Telling me I'm not enough sometimes left me a wreck.
But now I know I'm enough and you should too,
For I'm my own judge, crying out with a sound so true.
There'll be times when things don't go as planned
My mind gets stuck and I'll need to take a break.
But I know I'm enough and you should be too,
We must learn to trust ourselves, 'cause there's nobody true.
We can learn from our mistakes, something I'm still trying
Knowing that I'm enough, helped me keep trying
For I know I'm enough and you should too,
No one else knows more than me and more than you.
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Renne:
Title: My flaws. and i love it I think its bold and new and well you^^
LianaT:
@renne wrote:
Title: My flaws. and i love it I think its bold and new and well you^^
That is a perfect titleπ
LianaT:
I love all the poems so much. I love how they all have a bit of defiance against the world in them, and staying true to yourself. Amazingπ
Renne:
@lars @chuckthedonut @arieonna loookkkkkkkkkk
chuckthedonut:
Omg, this is just too much to explain. It's a masterpiece, no joke. I love it because it really expressed how you feel inside. It has a meaning that I bet all of us could understand. And yeah, @renne that's a great title. Keep it up !! <333
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Arieonna:
Heck that s the best thing i ever heard @oliver69 this might be my favorite 1 u made i made a lot of mistakes in my life and i always regret them
Renne:
OMG YESS
Renne:
this is the best as of right now watch him come up with something wayyyy better
chuckthedonut:
@renne wrote:
this is the best as of right now watch him come up with something wayyyy better
Frrr
5172319:
THIS IS SO GOODDDDD and the title u picked out is rlly fitting too
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Lars:
Wow, this is amazing. I can see that you put a lot of thought and detail into this. Keep up the good work :]
Renne:
he do it everytimeeeeeeeeeeee
OLIVER69:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
chuckthedonut:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
You're welcome bsf !! <333
Renne:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
AWW THANKS BSF AND YOUR WELCOME BRUDA AND WE LOVE YOUUUUUU!!
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chuckthedonut:
@renne wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
AWW THANKS BSF AND YOUR WELCOME BRUDA AND WE LOVE YOUUUUUU!!
YESSS, WE DO LOVE YOUUUU <3333
LianaT:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
Of course, you're an amazing writer =)
Renne:
@chuckthedonut wrote:
@renne wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
AWW THANKS BSF AND YOUR WELCOME BRUDA AND WE LOVE YOUUUUUU!!
YESSS, WE DO LOVE YOUUUU <3333
PERIODDD
Arieonna:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
u r a amaking poetry i can tell some day u r gonna be a famous poetry writer that everyone is gonna bag for your adograph
chuckthedonut:
@arieonna wrote:
@oliver69 wrote:
Omg I've just read all of your guy's comments and you are so incredibly nice. Thank you all so very much for such kind words I do love the title "Flaws". Thank you guys again.
u r a amaking poetry i can tell some day u r gonna be a famous poetry writer that everyone is gonna bag for your adograph
frrr, you're going to be famoussss <3
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Renne:
gonna be? OLIVER ALREADY IS FAMOUS!!!
Arieonna:
@renne wrote:
gonna be? OLIVER ALREADY IS FAMOUS!!!
Agree @oliver69 I'm your BIGGEST FAN
Renne:
NO YOU CANT BE!
Renne:
I'M HIS SISTER! IM HIS BIGGEST FAN!
Arieonna:
@renne wrote:
I'M HIS SISTER! IM HIS BIGGEST FAN!
no i am his biggest fan u r realted can i have your ado graph @oliver69
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Renne:
@arieonna wrote:
@renne wrote:
I'M HIS SISTER! IM HIS BIGGEST FAN!
no i am his biggest fan u r realted can i have your ado graph @oliver69
NO I GET IT FIRST!!
Renne:
MOVE BACK MISSY @arieonna
Arieonna:
@renne wrote:
@arieonna wrote:
@renne wrote:
I'M HIS SISTER! IM HIS BIGGEST FAN!
no i am his biggest fan u r realted can i have your ado graph @oliver69
NO I GET IT FIRST!!
why u live with him which is lucky u probably have every thing from him already
Renne:
NO I DONT!!!!
Arieonna:
@renne wrote:
NO I DONT!!!!
just saying I AM HIS #1 FAN
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Renne:
YOU ARE NOT! MOVE IT!
Arieonna:
@renne wrote:
YOU ARE NOT! MOVE IT!
Make me
OLIVER69:
Alright Alright ladies come down... y'all both are awesome and amazing... so since @renne was online first here is my autograph for you first
"π―π πππππ
π»πππ π π½ππππΎπ"
OLIVER69:
now @arieonna can have her autograph from me ig...
"π―π πππΎπππππΆ
π»πππ π π½ππππΎπ"
Arieonna:
@oliver69 wrote:
now @arieonna can have her autograph from me ig...
"π―π πππΎπππππΆ
π»πππ π π½ππππΎπ"
OMG i am sooo puting this in my profile picture store yay
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KyledaGreat:
Great job on writing your poem! Here are some suggestions for names:
1. "Enough"
2. "Opportunities for Growth"
3. "True Judge"
4. "Center of My Being"
5. "Learning to Trust"
6. "My Own Sound"
7. "Stuck Sometimes"
8. "Nobody True"
9. "Keep Trying"
10. "More Than Me"
emilysmith1105:
good poem
Dolphan:
Very Good!!
5StarFab:
Very good the passion and effort in this and the fact it's flawless is great.